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He closed his hand over hers as she turned the key in the lock. She was so lost in her own head that she would have gone in the apartment without saying a thing to him. She looked up. His brows were drawn together with worry. 

“Are we okay?” he asked. 

“Sure,” she said and watched his expression harden. 

“Jasmine.” 

She released her keys to dislodge his hand on top of hers. She couldn’t think straight when he was touching her.  

“I didn’t mean to make you mad. It was just an observation, one that was out of line. Ending the night on a bad note instead of being the highlight of your week is the last thing I want to do.”

Even as her shoulders dropped at that smooth apology, she scuffed her shoe on the carpet. “I don’t like talking about my father.” 

“Noted.” 

She sighed and ran her hand through her hair as she leaned against the wall and looked up at him, relieved and irritated that he’d taken the choice out of her hands to end things. “How many meetings did you have today?”

“Four.” 

Her eyes bulged. “Didn’t your last one go on for three hours?”

“Yes.”

“Were your other meetings in New York?”

“Yes.” When she stared at him, he shrugged. “I work long days.” 

“How long?” When he didn’t answer, she pushed, “What time did you wake up?”

“Two.”

Her mouth dropped. “In the morning?”

“Of course.”

She straightened away from the wall. “And you still asked me to go to dinner? You should be in bed!”

“Okay, Mom.” 

He didn’t even crack a smile as he threw her words back in her face. She burst out laughing and then clamped a hand over her mouth so she wouldn’t wake her neighbors. 

“Touché.” She shook her head. “You’re insane. And you’re driving an hour and a half back to New York tonight?”

He nodded.

She raised her wrist to glance at her watch. “By the time you get home, you’ll have been up twenty-four hours.” She pushed her door open and flipped on the light. “Come inside and have a coffee first.”

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Comments

a.

Hussy

jupiter

mama y papa

Sara B

Yes, coffee and more….mmm

Nizz

Coffee? Is that what the kids are calling it nowadays

Stacey

His brows were drawn together with worry.  “Are we okay?” he asked.  My baby 😭

Priscilla

Smooth jas the good old come in on the excuse of having a drink 😉 😏

Stacey

I want to read Roth’s POV when she tells him to come inside

Priscilla

Roth cracking a joke 😭 😂

a.

I know he was malfunctioning on the inside.

Rabia

OMG how sweet of Jasmine to care about her man 😍 “

Rabia

“Come inside and have a coffee first.” Jas you’re literally inviting the man to warm your bed 😏

Nancy Nassradin

Using bean juice as an excuse 😭😭😭😭

Mits

I remember the snippet where Roth said she was the one who seduced him & she was all 😮 She’s so oblivious lol

Mits

Ford probably crying knowing his precious coffee was used to betray him back then 😂

AQ

😂😂😂

Nila

they will NOT just be having coffee

isy roth-caruso-ward

jas thinking she needs to break it off… a page later: invites him in 😭😭 she’s precious

P

Love when Roth brings out Jamie ❤️

P

The only way he can be close to her is through coffee 😆

Priscilla

Their first time 🥹

Vanessa Pendragon

“He didn’t even crack a smile as” for the Mom comment 🤣

M

just white noise

Gopika

Aaah now I’m wondering if Roth left before she woke up😭 or did he stay and feed or do something cutesy. Or if he left did he atleast leave her a note😭