Hollow Hunger (Lofi version) Thoughts? (Patreon)

A lot of the time when I'm working on non music stuff I listen to this lofi channel with super relaxing music and it inspired me to make a lofi version of one of my songs. I thought it turned out really nice, but would love to hear your opinion. My plan is to make some lofi versions of songs and upload to my second channel to revive that a bit, and if it's well received I potentially could upload some longer lofi project after a while :)