The egg of True Desire (Patreon)

This you see is the story I made a few months ago for that manga contest without dialogue, the theme was "seized with rage".

The results of the competition are finally out, and unfortunately my story did not make it to the rankings, I was told in an email from the contest people that the main flaw is that the design of the main character is not recognizable from the other characters... considering that there are only 2 characters, 3 counting the other version of the protagonist, it leaves me very puzzled.

I did my best with this manga, but apparently I could not make the story understandable to everyone; maybe I'm not good enough and I should have done something easier or maybe I would have failed anyway because I'm not talented enough for the judges in that competition.

I'm not going to lie to you, I knew I couldn't win but I expected at least to get into the rankings, not being able to do so was quite demoralizing.

However, I hope you enjoy this little manga of mine, which I chose by listening to your opinions and which I made by putting all my effort into it!

Let me know your opinions about it and have a happy Labor Day! :D