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I consider this is the halfway point of the comic. I'm open to thoughts on what I did with it. I'm already making plans for my next comic. So I wanna hear stuff I can carry over to the next one. As well as stuff I should avoid.

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tegirvaru

im just not sure i like the premise of this story. but didnt want to be critical, but i see no one else has really commented. although you never respond to most comments as far as ive seen.

ZoneSystem

I like the art and the character design. I'm just a little iffy on the storyline. The master and slave dynamic makes the consent a bit questionable. Then again I'm trying to apply my morals to a fictional furry world. The yiff is hot though.

ZR

I absolutely love small top big bottom stuff (bonus if there's versatility in the mix), though as the other comments say the consent issue makes it a tad uncomfortable. I say a tad because it is just fiction after all.

StarDragon

I need to have something to respond to usually. Saying positive stuff doesn't really help me. I know I'm good. But I need to know my flaws too. Saying if my work is fine, is just telling me to not do different stuff.

StarDragon

I hope the iffiness won't detract too much from it. Not every story has to be nice. It gets kinda boring when it's always positive stuff around.

StarDragon

It's getting harder separating fiction from base reality with furries I think. We're getting too mainstream, we need to go back.

Anonymous

I don't really get the feeling the big dude isn't consenting. They're in private quarters and he could f*ck the little guy up if he wanted to.

Anonymous

I guess my only complaint would be that it feels too short. I realize you said it's the halfway point, but that doesn't strike me as giving enough time for it to truly be a story, ya know?