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This should be the last teaser before the complete chapter (which should be in the vicinity of 36,000 words this time).

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Boris Michenski

Ok, I really look forward what goes next... And there is a question about Space marines going into the Core, a chapter which would have lost their marbels... Why do I suddenly think about Blood Ravens? Will we have an epic moment, where they steal everything from some greedy Durandins?

Forgottenone

There's so many chapters willing to send company's into the core the moment you mention a vault of super weapons that could be unleashed. The hard part will be picking and dealing with politics. More surprised that we not gotten a inquisition snapshot were they start digging into how the MM rines existed. After all Mars and basically all parties should be screaming for answers.

Speedster

I mean that’s probably classified at the level of Chinera and greater; idk if Tor would be able to gear except if he was liaison.

Speedster

I really hope it is Blood Ravens and we can see a Magnus reunion just because but based on final it’s likely the Wolves. They wouldn’t be included unless it was relevant I think

Gabriel Meadow

Yeah, it's definitely implied to be the Space Wolves or their Winter Sharks offshoot. They owe Taylor a lot and still have a lot of recklessness in their attitude.

Gohu lacd

Alright the grudge has been avoided... for now..

Gohu lacd

Now, I really like what you did with the duardins and especially Marder (coughKardumcough). Their race can be incredibly greedy to the point of absurd, their avidity for more can push them to do terrible mistakes, and their grudges can carry an irrational hatred that would have been better forgotten. But there is also a noblesse in them, a true potential for good that could benefit the imperium for the better. Marder illustrate that in how he decided to care for those under him rather than falling for greed. I hope to see more of him, perhaps somethig like : " Seul les poilus sont importants. L'or n'est qu'un outil, il n'a pas d'âme, il ne produit rien. Il n'est que le résultat de la réussite et non la réussite en elle-même."

Antony444

Indeed, indeed. Thanks for the support!