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All right, I'm back. The writing of the TWO chapter is proggressing...though more slowly than I want. At the time I'm writing those lines, I have only reached the 20,000 words threshold.

This is why I got so long before updating another not-teaser...though you get a 13,000 words-long one today. Hopefully things will get more love from the Gods of Writing, and Tzeentch will eventually stop ruining my inspiration somewhere in the next days. One can dream, after all.

Anyway, remember to refuse the gifts of Chaos, and most of all, never forget that under the right circumstances, yes, the Orks are here to defeat you, and they need only one good shot to ruin the day. The power of the WAAGH! is all they have, but sometimes, lack of subtlety will cary the day...

Enjoy!

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mastergamer98007

Yriel is really ticking all the boxes for a new 40k malekith lite, why again did cegorach let addaioth be born for all thee trouble they are causing the eldar race.

Ravenext

Woah, hold on. Was that Ork Cap'n... THE SURVIVOR FROM ALL THOSE CHAPTERS AGO!?

Gabriel Meadow

Brukk-Brukk has repeatedly appeared in various chapters since, on his long slow rise to power.

Gabriel Meadow

Hang on. Brukk-Brukk spoke in plain Low Gothic? Is it wrong that I find this more concerning than him snatching the Cronesword?

Peplum

Lol, Brukk-X-Brukk is immortal. He is the perfect representation of "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"

Templar9999

Brukk-Brukk is percieved as a Krork to the Crone Sword. A Remnant of Morai-Heg percieved her old ally and chose him. Even if his entire Waaag is destroyed, this matters so much more. And he developed this way explicitly in a mirror of Talyor. This could indicate a focal point for GorkaMorka's return. Absolute cinema. I hope he joins up with Leet and Borek to meet, and fight, the Swarmbringer. After a humorous, and absolutely destructive, fight. Taylor meeting her Ork (Krork) counterpart will be hilarious. And she is empress of the Aeldari. The Krork were made to be their allies against the C'Tan. You call it the Witch King armor. But I am envisioning the Lich King Armor from Warcraft. Hopefully without the bound soul of an Archdemon of undeath. But unlikely. The only thing special about the armor of the Witch King of Angmar was that it allowed him to interact with the material plain. The same is true for all of the Nazgul. Their soul anchors were the 9 rings, and through them The One Ring.

Nereus24

As always the stupidity of the Eldar knows no limit. It is as if Yriel never heard about how the Orks function. Like the bigger they are the more intelligent they become. And everyone knows that an intelligent Orks is a catastrophic entity of madness and destruction.

John W

I feel the armor should be based on Guts black armor from Berserk.

Antony444

This is an idea, but the Eldar are very much the opposite of 'bulky' that is the Berserk armour. The long-ears are far more lithe, even when they use the 'edgy style' of the Drukhari.

Antony444

Or rather: if Weaver doesn't come to cripple me, I grow stronger faster...

Antony444

That entirely depends your perspective, but the former could indeed lead to more unpleasant consequences than the latter...

Antony444

Funny enough, you will get an answer to that question before the end of this chapter.

Antony444

Hmm...remember this is not the Yriel of the 41st millennium. He's younger, far less experienced. And most importantly of all, his chief enemies so far have not been often greenskins...least of all the big dangerous Warbosses. And of course, there's always the problem of Eldar arrogance raising its ugly head at the worst moment possible...

Starseeker

And interestingly enough, while he was there at Fay, the death star, Pavia, with the Ork waaghboss against the Monolith, at Mandragora and latest (before this) at the Tyrant star, Weaver has not once actually seen him, nor did he ever have the chance to fight her directly.

Thiemo Guenther

How convenient, for a significant fraction of the disaffected Eldar to concentrate themselves into one fleet. That way they can be dealt with more efficu

Nicola Chen

You pulled a Malekith. And a krork. In the same chapter. Ooohhh boy, this is gonna be legendary.