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So it was promised, so it has come.

I'm ready to present you 14 pages and 5,000 words which are totally not a teaser.

Obviously, even this not-teaser may be subject to lot of modifications. The writing is advancing well, but I'm regularly modifying things.

Enjoy!

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frank schellingerhout

praise be the not words we will not think them true or a sneak peak what so every

Hunter

Awesome teaser for the not trailer. I eagerly await future progress. I hope you can expand it a bit before sunday is out with that cliff hanger. I love what you are doing with the muse instead if her just using the astronomicon. Weaver is a confirmed demigoddess

Boris Michenski

Well, in this amalgam of words which is undoubtedly not a teaser, the word Vengence and Avenge came several times, which led me to think that there would be at least two Avengers... Also, I expect, that once a W would met QoB she will make sure that a certain T would be around to film it.

Hunter

Just remember due to Weaver being a demigoddess the muse herself says she is less limited then the priestess in appearance and she will become something new. That means she may become a human eldar hybrid. Awesome and interesting. “I am eldari you were not” Means weaver is now eldari due to acknowledging her claim and enforcing it cool

Nicholas

Thank you for the "not a teaser"! Adding much of Isha's domain to Taylor's powerset absolutely makes Taylor becoming the Empress of the Aeldari the biggest political bomb to come out of this. Even if, Taylor can find time to do the job, and she already said she didn't have time to handle an expansion of her sector, and this seems likely to be much more complicated. And even if, the titles of Living Saint and Empress of a Billion Moons play nice together metaphysically, which I find very difficult to believe although it is possible. You still have the issue of the fact that Taylor now has the personal command of a galaxy wide force that rivals a full strength Asartes Legion and the ability to rapidly increase its numbers. This opens the possibility of turning some maiden worlds into Aeldari fortress worlds with populations in the billions and defenses that could stand off a large crusade. None of the High Lords are going to be happy with this!

Gabriel Meadow

No wonder Hsiagn'la said Weaver dying would delay her ascension and implied her to be a real deity when mocking Be'lakor. She's already halfway there in a couple weeks time since the convo.

Lee Shilo

Aeldari having unlimited potential means even higher escalations, no doubt. As for the inheritance from the high priestess, it would certainly explain the possible healing of a certain living but injured primarch. Powers of healing, regeneration, fertility - soul included, most likely.

Lee Shilo

Why is she using only one sword, rather than Drizzting it? Or Eraser-ing him as an encore? Am I missing something?

Michael Zalesny

Uhmmm, if Taylor gained the Life aspect or such, i wonder if the Kriegers will, if their planet somehow gows the way it did it cannon, will get an even better version of vita womb technology? Unless ofc i misunderstood what aspect she is inheriting?

Gohu lacd

Since the next ennemy of Weaver is more than probably the political shitstorm about to hit the imperium after the end of the black crusade, it's a good thing this muse was the Guilliman equivalent of the eldar empire, Taylor is gonna need it for all the backlash of her new xeno suppliants. On a unrelanted note, I'd like to ask a question I'm not sure you haven't answered elsewhere : Do you have any plans to incorporate the Leagues of Votann described in the 9th edition in your story or are you gonna stick with your initial Duardin version ?

s22132

I can't even imagine how complicated and explosive the aftermath of all of this will be, though I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what you come up with. Maybe Vandire will do the galaxy a favor and die of apoplexy. ;) Thanks for the update and the 'not a teaser.'

GAMB42

Very nice not an update. My only problem is with the fact you are giving us readers cliffhangers in a not!teaser. That is just evil. Now for some much needed avenging! With a extra dose of eldari goddess power mixed. Poor Lorgar is in for a bad time. I also want to know if the league of Voltann is gonna make an appearance, though your interpretation sounds much better for dwarfs in space. Lastly and probably the most important, are we going to see the reaction of QoB to Taylor's new power by the end of this chapter ? And will it be recorded for blackmai... I mean for the sake of historical accuracy ?