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I've lost count of how many times in the last few hours I'd saved out the PNG, only to go back in and make further adjustments or additions to the dialogue. Some bits, there just wasn't room for, like the Disney cast member being horrified, the park's lawyer being described as tired, or Mercy screaming "she's 13, you f#%&ing animals!!" as she "restrains" the mob...

The remaining details of what'd happened, I'm thinking about putting out in the form of an incident report. Otherwise, those details might make up 2-3 more comic pages that I don't have layouts for, and would need some backgrounds that I just wouldn't enjoy rendering. It'd simply take much longer than I want to spend on this part of the story.

The next page I have planned could also be a problem. It would focus on the aftermath of the incident, after Daisy gets back to school. The problem is, I only just had any ideas for its visuals about a week ago. In addition to designs for her group of friends, I'd need background reference for a busy school hallway and gymnasium bleachers. Backgrounds are my kryptonite.

My options are to either push forward regardless of how long it'll take, or skip that page and do either Alice & Violet's ride home, or Rose getting home from work.