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I need some input for the next change... I was thinking about a career/skills change, passport change, language skills loss, religion change maybe, although that could happen more smoothly... Any suggestions for options for the next poll?

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Meph

I would start making her drawn to the idea of not working and how Muslim wives are taken care of and protected by their husband. As she is catered to in a sense, differing to men becomes a way to get more. For community, to fit in, she is drawn to the mosque and in time the Quran. A few thoughts. Great story so far.

L W

Always love me a language change! A gradual degradation of her English through hypnosis or similar means would be my favorite.

Christopher Haslop

As Daisy is returning to Tehran there are several options open to the wheel, as has been suggested she could be conditioned to speak only Farsi and no longer understand English. As it's Tehran she could become an ultra orthodox Shia as this is the predominant version of Islam in Iran with the constant monitoring of the "Morality Police" Or, despite being indoctrinated with the Shia version of Islam she could eventually become one of the women who rebel against the conservatism of Islam, perhaps that could be the final twist after her transformation. Personally I think that becoming the "typical" Muslim wife has been done before and a different conclusion could be a better outcome.

Christopher Haslop

As the final twist, so far the endings have all been similar, that isn't a complaint just that a different conclusion would be a change. Daisy could, as I suggested become fully immersed as a Shia Muslim, dress, attitude etc but after a chance meeting with a rebel group of women their message triggers a change in her conditioning resulting in her rebelling against her new family.

Meph

Personally I would prefer her to try and rebel but fail, but thats just me.

Christopher Haslop

I have only just read the third part which I really enjoyed