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DRAGONBALL Z Golden Age - Chapter 9 - Consumer of Worlds [Ongoing] (Patreon)

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2023-08-21 15:19:12
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With the prologue of the previous chapter establishing the groundwork for the arc to come, we now kick-off with what I dub Golden Age's version of the Moro Arc OOOOOR Galactic Patrol Prisoner Saga.

Synopsis: As the five most dangerous prisoners from Universe 7 are en route to Time Patrol HQ for re-assignment and processing, the ship is boarded by a mysterious figure, who sets into motion a chain of events that could lead to the deaths of ALL the Z-fighters and the end of Universe 7.

Previous Chapters of the Golden Age Canon:

Chapter 1 (Complete)- https://patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-51405933…

Chapter 2 (Complete) -https://patreon.com/posts/53670523

Chapter 3 (Complete) - https://patreon.com/posts/54542930

Chapter 4 (Complete) - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-61111932

Chapter 5 (Complete) - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-65174667

Chapter 6 (Complete) - https://patreon.com/posts/72546778

Chapter 7 (Complete) - https://www.patreon.com/posts/77807205

Chapter 8 (Complete) - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-84415855

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Comments

Tobi

Why is it nice people turned into monsters :[

UltraSpinkie

Wait I spotted Red in Gohan's Eyes. A teaser for something familiar?

GamerLegend09

*Cover/Pg. 0* Now this gives i you a clear view of who’s playing the role of a puppet master here

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 1* Alright…haven’t read much of DB super apart from seeing spoilers through YouTube so this will be interesting to see some back story from this Goat Wizard villain

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 2* 😖 but dammit why do you Gotta keep making them cute and innocent like this?!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 3* 😕 and at that time this innocent little “Kid” had yet to learn the hard way “The price of Greatness is Responsibility” (-Winston Churchill)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* Even so….Even in this Twisted Turn of events in which fate had dealt him a bad hand across timelines…..they can still have a chance to learn right?…. (😑 I blame you for making me hopeful here Write)

AJ

Damn write....that's deep man

Silverstrike

You know I just realized something. There is color in the cover. RED. I have a feeling that is going to be so cool when it happens that I am going to play that transformation when he transforms…OMG. So something is going to happen and he his going to snap!! https://youtu.be/EsLFGSMEp3g?si=uttVTPmMMmBtWf2A. Oh lord you just had to chose O’dimm didn’t you…lol!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* 😥 oh god I can hear the children singing again

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* **Top right Panel** 😬😬😬😬😬 Aw Crud it’s getting harder and harder to resist **Top left panel** 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 EVEN LORD POPO!!!? **Middle Right Panel** 😓🙏🏻 R.I.P. Greggory **Middle Left Panel** 😁 awww yeah Krill-man you Scatter Bullet that ass AllNightLong!!! **Bottom Right Panel** ……🤨 Recoome Dive? **Bottom middle Panel** 🤕 Aw damn that’s gonna hurt **Bottom left Panel** 🫤 oh boy, how many universes are gonna perish from a constant fail to use Chopsticks?!

TheWriteFiction
>>116000766

lol. I'm surprised you didn't shout "RECOOOOME TRUST" from the HFIL Episode 7 when they were doing the trust exercise, since that was a direct reference to it.

Corphicks814

I’m really excited for the next chapter. I’m really hoping we see more of Fasha in this chapter. Hope you don’t mind answering a few questions about her 1. In fasha’s universe, was she the one attacked by the kanassan instead of Bardock. 2. Why is she given more power by this kanassan than what Bardock got in the original timeline. 3. Are we gonna get a backstory about her in the future like Zangya. 4. How did she devolop her tendency to be nude most of the time, and why she likes to workout in the nude.

Joshua Johnson

Can we talk about my do Krillin real quick 😄

Charisonic

I see. So the eldritch Gods are just unfathomably powerful. Got it. Nice callback to the goku vs beerus first encounter where pretty much the same thing happened

De'Andrae White

How good is the Man In Black's fighting skills?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* 😮‍💨 oh thank god for instincts

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* Wait is this intimidating aura coming from Nyar? The Soul of Gaunter? or a Combination of the 2?

TheWriteFiction
>>116252247

I think what the scene is implying, even when taking Gaunter's original source material into account, that Nyar and Gaunter are one in the same.

Silverstrike

Pg 10 I think this is going to prove to Celipa that even with all of her desensitizing feelings of wanting to die this proves that deep down she wants to live.

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg7-8: Getting some massive Elder Scrolls vibes here. Gives off the same vibe of "You only continue to exist because you amuse me" Also the Man in Black is one of the few creatures out there that can murder Fasha, paradox curse be damned isn't he? Also can I ask you a few questions Write? 1. What is the extent of abuse Reina can take before the light goes out? Because I recall Moro stabbing her and she laughed it off. 2. Do you do requests or only commissions? Because if its a yes, I still want you to draw my avatar fighting Reina and basically humbling her through all the weird shit he does, which she has no counter too because she's used to fighting Ki manipulators, not reality warpers who have a really bad habit of kicking death and the laws of physics in the balls up until they meet someone higher up on the food chain. 3. Are the God Tiers of DC/Marvel/The Elder Scrolls stronger than the Man in Black or his equals? 4. Have you considered making a oneshot story about Anthony Fremont from the Twilight Zone?

TheWriteFiction
>>116636432

Yeah the Man in Black is terrifyingly strong. 1.-Reina can take an enormous amount of abuse, about as much as Wolverine. Her healing factor due to her skills is insane. Hell, even when her body is completely annihilated, her spirit can willingly create a new body and reinhabit it out of sheer willpower alone. 2. You’re gonna have to wait for commissions to reopen if you want to request something like that. 3. The God tiers of Marvel, DC and what not are already part of the Man in Black’s collection. If he can collect the souls of the literal Gods of Ancient Egypt, like Apep, then he’s hardly intimidated by anything. 4. No. I have not.

Giorno Giovanna34

So when the Z Fighters face the Man in Black they die simple as that? Because we all know their going to fight him eventually since he's clearly a villain.

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg 12: You know that makes me think: Would a Black Hole even work on Fasha? Because she did say she rather go through that then throw hands with the Man in Black.

TheWriteFiction
>>116845239

Black holes wouldn't really work on her, true. But it's still a risky death wish if there ever is any, considering their effects over space and time.

Giorno Giovanna34

Why even have the Z Fighters fight if he knows they can't beat him? It can't be for entertainment, because if he wants that he can use his powers to make someone. Also quick question what did the Man in Black do to Zeus and all the other Gods who in accurate Greek Mythology did lots of shameless immoral things?

TheWriteFiction
>>117010361

It is for entertainment because he likes toying with people and messing with people, no matter what they are. But you are making this comment under the assumption that the Man in Black would even involve himself directly or interact directly with the heroes in any hostile way, which he hasn't done up until this point. All he has done was scare the shit out of the heroes for his own entertainment, pushing them in directions he thinks will be fun to observe. And if you haven't already caught on, he already has the souls of the Greek Gods in his possession, since he obviously conquered them.

Tobi

Ph:14 got say for God he's very good with his words

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* 😠 you use a Goddamn Dinner Spoon for Soup and you know it you Sick sunavabitch, The difference is night and day!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 23* 🙁 vidro…….😔 Write if what you told me holds water then there’s no one displaying a more “vulnerably” amiable front than she’s displaying in this moment, well done 👍🏻

Tobi

pg:24 poor gal she's just looking for her place in the world to find friends to find a family to find love. that god is defiantly going use her

Anonymous

Interesting that it’s even possible for her to still *get* zenkai boosts in the first place, seeing as she’s essentially immortal. How can one get beaten to near death if it’s impossible for them to die?

Giorno Giovanna34

As much as I like that Fasha got a second wind, it still doesn't change the fact that she'll probably still lose this fight. Afterall there's nothing stopping Janemba from rewriting the universe so that she was never immortal, except he won't do that since I'm pretty sure he's insane and not very creative. Also how many Zenkai Boosts would it take for Fasha to unlock Super Saiyan 4 or God?

GamerLegend09

🫤 anybody notice the changes on this app?

TheWriteFiction
>>119082697

Yeah. It messed up my notification viewing. Now it just throws everything together and doesn't separate them.

ShadowRipper

Que bills ni que wiss esta si es una batalla entre dioses

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 44* 😠 oh ok I guess we’re doing THIS now 💥

GamerLegend09
>>119240027

Welp i’d say it’s about time that Mama Fasha taught a certain somebody proper etiquette in 😠😠😠“Table Manners!!!”

GamerLegend09
>>119240027

speaking of which, how old do you think they are in this? cause I mean if they’re like around the age of idk 3 minutes??? a couple days??? and they’re intelligent enough at that size they can understand people (😑 in this case a monster) giving them commands who’s to say they aren’t literally “playing with their food”….😜

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 47* 🙄 y’know….even if one couldn’t get on their level it’d be Damn impressive to barely keep track of this fight visually at their speed….. Just saiyan 🤭

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 48* 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 ……Did th-…Did they just……Pull a Third Gear!!!??!?

Giorno Giovanna34
>>119934621

Like I told you before Gamer: That's his gimmick. Janemba can alter reality. Anything you can imagine; he can do. That's how reality manipulation works. The only way to defeat someone with this power if they're not insane or an idiot is either to have the same powers or be immune/resistant to aforementioned powers.

GamerLegend09
>>119934621

Well…yeah you’re right- but I’d never imagined they’d be insanely idiotic enough to pull a Goku and use a “Stolen Technique” 😵‍💫 FROM ANOTHER FLIPPING UNIVERSE!!!

TheWriteFiction
>>119934621

@Day Giovanna34 - No need to be argumentative. Gamer is just really surprised, is all. Reality warping can do anyone's heads in.

TheWriteFiction
>>119934621

@GamerLegend09 - You should go back to watch the movie, since Janemba can actually do this move, since he used it against Goku in his first form. The difference here is Janemba just made his fist bigger as it was travelling through the portal using his space bending ability, since physics are a hypothetical concept with him.

GamerLegend09
>>119934621

@TheWriteFiction - 😶 it’s really my fault Write, I should’ve made it better clear that my memory of fusion reborn was a little fuzzy

GamerLegend09
>>119934621

@Day Giovanna34 - 😔 🙏🏻 Sorry to put you in this Position Giovanna buddy I should’ve made that more clear

Aqua-Sun

As much as I’m excited to see my comic worked on, I LOVE seeing this get updated! You always utilize the villains and supporting cast that the original series never did! You expand on it and I love that! Makes the series far more entertaining! It kind of reminds me of what tfs did, specifically with android 16 that little bit of extra info that Goku was the reason Gero’s son (forgot his name) died instead of it being stray bullet like the original is genius and totally makes sense as to why he was so hell bent on killing Goku You both don’t do ones and dones, you take the material you’ve been given and do so much more with it. Tbh I wish you got as much attention is they did, you definitely deserve it

Julian Fratzscher

I just love Portal abilities, and the use for size changing is just a treat. Woulda also guess that Fasha may already have the Alpha Form at her disposal.

GamerLegend09
>>120005579

☺️ it just warms my Heart to see other members expressing great patience like this 😉 and Expressing the proper Credit where it’s due too 😁👍🏻 Literally couldn’t have said it better myself

Aqua-Sun
>>120005579

It just like seeing a DBZ fan comic that’s like really done well. It’s hard to get into DBZ fan comics that have ocs because most of them feel like Mary Sue’s and just ridiculously overpowered. Which yes as it is their comic they are inclined to be self-indulgent. But there’s a difference between that and just making your character unbeatable. I mean if your gonna go that route do what One Punch Man did and make other characters to counteract that element. Most of my ocs aren’t really overpowered, they go through hurdle after hurdle and learn from loses. Not that I’m saying other people don’t do this as well but I just rarely see it with DBZ ocs. But here with Gohan you see his progress and yes even though he is stronger in in the original series Write is countering this by making more powerful villains as well utilizing some that Gohan hasn’t fought before which would lead him at a temporary disadvantage. His approach is honestly inspiring when it comes to making a series. Original or not. Sorry I got a little off topic there, I just really felt like I needed to share my thoughts.

andrew lance

A page... With colour... *feints*

Colby

OOOOO that's one way to showcase new abilities!

Omni

Now this is interesting, seeing your spin on Vegeta's ultra ego form. Can't wait see your version of the form in action, I take it that does more than just convert damage into power/strength

TheMaskGamer

like the coloring for the last page

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 51* 😬 oh that’s not Fair! How am I supposed to focus reading this if ya go and Flaunt a sexy…Tail wagging…🤤🤤🤤 Female Saiyan Ass like that

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 52* 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 ok not what I expected but- STILL JUST AS COOL!!!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 53* 😆 SO COOOOOOOOL!!! 😅😅😅 buuuut I’ve got this aching feeling it’s not gonna be that easy for her

Tobi

Pg:52 she still hot for me :3

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 53: Well before Janemba was surprised now he's curious.

ShadowRipper

Janemba tiene alguna debilidad?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 54* 😙 yyyeah having just re-watched fusion reborn, I can proudly say that I am not surprised

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 54 Pt. 2* 🤔 though to be fair if I didn’t, I would’ve sworn those were jellybeans, or some kind of rock candy, floating in the air

TheWriteFiction
>>120229834

It could be. Those masses of matter, solidified gases, or "jelly beams" as people call them ARE Janemba's creation, so him being able to alter the chemical structure and matter of things in universe is canon to the DBZ lore. Think about it, Janemba, in his first form alone, was so powerful he was able to playfully hold the entire afterlife hostage, transformed the clouds of Otherworld into lumps of shiny matter (jelly beans), re-write the laws of life and death by bringing the dead back to life and even bringing those stuck in limbo back into existence, break down the walls between dimensions across the universe (implying that even the multiverse could've been opened up to him), transform a lot of hell into a crystal hellscape, and trap the entire ogre population that guards and administers the afterlife inside of impenetrable ice, and not just those inside King Yemma's palace. He even transformed some of those frozen ogres into clones of himself with a touch. And that's even before we get to the combat capabilities at his disposal.

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 54: Janemba smirking before turning his opponent's attacks into soap bubbles is something I expect from my own OC Neo Sampson and I just love that.

Giorno Giovanna34

Also Write Fasha does know that ranged attacks don't work on reality warpers right? I mean if it was that easy Goku wouldn't have needed help to beat Janemba, and even then Gogeta only won because of the plot, since DBZ characters have a terrible track record against fighters who have more tricks than punching and blowing shit up.

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 54: I guess no one told Fasha that energy attacks have about as much effect on reality warpers as bullets have on Superman. Honestly she had much better luck punching him.

Julian Fratzscher

Fasha, just assume that everything works as well on him, as it does on you.

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 55: Poor Fasha just found out that she's a big fish in a small pond.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 55* 😅 and in comes the fear & Terror to come from that little Foreshadowing……😅😅😅 here’s hoping they don’t have 4th wall breaking capabilities in this universe

Chris Cannon

Damn, Janemba’s going early Molecule Man on her (Marvel villain). I don’t wanna count Fasha out yet since she might have a few more cards left. But judging by her reaction, chances of said cards working might be slim. Btw, I love it when you depict fear in scenes like this, I can feel the danger she in. Yet another thing I miss from the franchise that isn’t often shown anymore.

Chris Cannon

Also, call me weird, and Idk how you did it, but I’m really liking brow less Fasha in both ssj3 & UR, as well as her literal Thunder Thighs. I forgot what the particular troupe is called, but it’s giving me some major cave & jungle babe vibes.

De'Andrae White

I just realize that Vegeta's receding hairline goes way back to Planet Vegeta's assassination🤣😂💀

ShadowRipper

Pag 56 cuantas referencias encontraron?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 56* 😳……..🤦🏻‍♂️ so help me if the first words we see them say is “Gate of Babylon”

TheWriteFiction
>>120312270

I knew you'd pick up that reference. :) This is just Janemba utilizing his portals in a new but familiar way.

GamerLegend09
>>120312270

🧐 Pretty broadband choice of weapons I’m seeing here too…Brave sword, Angel attendant staff, Bansho Fan, Key Sword, Darkness Sword, Evil Spear, ooo the Heran Rapier’s back too, 😄 hah Korin’s staff, the Scythe looks new…unless your going for a solidified variant of the Sickle of Sorrow (Super)……Orr a taller longer version of the Demon Scythe (GT)

Julian Fratzscher

Pause right there, "Molecular structure of the Hakai energy"?

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 56: Also Write is this the first time Fasha has fought a reality warper? Because otherwise she shouldn't be surprised that Hakai didn't work.

TheWriteFiction
>>120343389

Everything in the universe is made up of elementary particles, and that is true for all forms of ki, mortal and God alike, since they interact physically with one another. Just by touching it, Janemba was able to change the formula that makes Hakai possible and cancelled it.

TheWriteFiction
>>120344596

This is the first time she faced one this powerful. She wasn't expecting this Janemba to be able to counter her so effectively.

Giorno Giovanna34

So Write how exactly did your version of Janemba get so strong after beating Gogeta? Because the OG version couldn't beat Gogeta when they were just a Super Saiyan.

Giorno Giovanna34

Write I have some questions for you: 1. Does Bulma's father know that the Man in Black plans on betraying them in the future? 2. Is Fasha's adaption like Doomsday or better? 3. Who is your favorite super villain? 4. Are Goten and Trunks ever going to get out of Goku and Vegeta's shadows? I mean you've made it perfectly clear that Gohan is no longer a sidekick but everyone else is another story.

TheWriteFiction
>>120398904

This was a Janemba who lucked out and managed to acquire a Black Form out of desperation to kill Gogeta. Just like his Xeno counterpart, or at least explains the origins of it. He then lived for decades reaping chaos across the multiverse. He is one of the many outliers the Time Patrol go out of their way to try and stop.

TheWriteFiction
>>120403148

The Man in Black hasn't revealed any such plans to the Briefs family. Fashas adaptation is quite potent, and quite like Doomsdays. Favourite super villain is Agent Smith. Just wait till I get to when Goten and Trunks exist as a duo.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 57* Well, would you look at that they can dual Wield…..those look like the same Original sword he used from the movie, since he originally made it out of that club it’d be no surprise to see them wielding two of them

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 58* 😀 oh hey she can do the same thing that Goku Bla-😱HOOOLLLY SHIT!!!

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 58 Let me guess: Here comes a new challenger? Because if the look on Janemba's face didn't make it obvious that wasn't him.

Giorno Giovanna34

Also before I forget: What's her (Lady Maria) gimmick? Because if all she brings to the table is stabbing you with a sword, then she shouldn't have come.

TheWriteFiction
>>120644547

She, like most of the Man in Black's servants, use Psycho Matter in their attacks. Since they can enter dream worlds and nightmare worlds at will, as well as cross borders into areas of the supernatural and divine, they debuff their opponents' abilities with Psycho Matter to make them more vulnerable to their abilities, and it is very effective. Nothing can kill them when they're using this ability.

Giorno Giovanna34

Write does Fasha have any other tricks besides spatial manipulation and Doomsday tier adaption? Because now would be a good time to break them out.

Julian Fratzscher

Can't wait (but will endure) for the explanation about these guys.

Aqua-Sun

Love how the villains are way more complex now then they ever were in the original DBZ. In the canon story it was always who punched the hardest or shot the biggest ki blast. With yours it seems like it won’t be that simple XD

TheWriteFiction
>>120876506

I'm glad you get it. As long as you understand this concept, then you'll be able to get how things will start playing out in the long run.

Aqua-Sun
>>120876506

Yup! Looking forward to seeing how you handle Vegeta and Goku when it comes to this concept

GamerLegend09

So this is nothing related to Golden Age whatsoever but I just wanted to share with any and everyone of my fellow Members who celebrate the holiday to Have a, 💀👻🎃Happy Halloween🎃👻💀

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 68* 🤨 wait she’s not eve-…😳 and she’s still somehow in the Nightmare!? How did she get to Cainhurst!!?

TheWriteFiction
>>121068328

Originally she came from Cainhurst is the backstory behind her, because she was born and raised there. The nightmare where you fought her in is most likely based on the place where she committed her suicide, so this is not the nightmare, but a memory of where she was before her final moments. The Man in Black just so happened to interfere with her plans.

GamerLegend09
>>121068328

Oook so he/they just so happened to slip into the Memory of Cainhurst before it turned into a Nightmare upon her Suicide?

De'Andrae White

Bro packed up Gogeta like a lunchbox ☠️😳🚬

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 75 Pt. 2* 😵 Lady Maria don’t touch their hand 🥕🥕🥕🥕

Dean Zamp

Congratulations Write another amazing chapter in the books.

GamerLegend09

✌🏻😄 Fantastic work as always Write, 😉 the Story’s taking an exciting direction 😂 I was thinking about monster a little when it showed earth and I saw the moon in frame from Chapter 2 Pg. 23 if you can believe it 😁😁😁😁😁

Anonymous

Shouldn’t the Rabbit guys be dead with how many times the moon has been blown up?

TheWriteFiction
>>121527159

Akira has confirmed they are alive, and ended up floating in space until Kami brought back the moon each time. They even appeared briefly on the moon in DBS manga when Merus flew by.