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You beautiful people have supported me so well, and today I can finally give something back I am really proud of. Here is your first look at Aviah.If the bio seems generic, I apologize, I am having to hold back many world elements. As a result you will see things like "the empire" instead of an actual name for... reasons. 

Of course everything is subject to change, but here is one of our main characters. 

Aviah HempirAge - 32Job - Expert soldier for hire - Former bounty hunter. Bio - Over the last 14 years Aviah has built a reputation for being one of the best sharp shots in the empire. She enlisted at 15 and fought in the (redacted) wars. After her service ended she became a bounty hunter for the lords of (redacted). She exclusively went after kill contracts. Often ambushing her targets and ending the situation with a single shot at a distance. After killing many members of crime families, the price on her head became to high for safety. As a result, one of her friends, Lord (redacted), told her of an opportunity to leave the empire and discover new lands. Being hired by Captain Kira as an expert soldier, Aviah is now at sea. 

Physical description: Height - 5 foot 10 inches. Build - Extremely Muscular. Hair - Blond/short or in a topknot. 

Comments

Jesse

Do you mean she's mercenary?

Daniel Greene

Good question! Kinda, but her title of “expert soldier” is do to her speciality in sharp shooting. Referring to soldiers hired for a specific tasks/duties.

Mario Stöffler

due to the vibe I get by reading this I imagine your novel takes place in the modern time?

Waxillium

It might a little before that time of sorts, but if you haven’t read the Powder Mage series you could most likely get some good inspiration and or tips for 18-19th century weaponry.

Keelia Silvis

This reads like a great DnD character backstory, which I love.

Squidman1881

Seems like an interesting description. I've always found writing character descriptions to be difficult, since there is often so much to a character and it is hard to just say outright. You should talk about her personality some, too. I think it is personality rather than circumstance that really makes an interesting character.

KJ Reading

She sounds really cool! Also I also have a Kira in my book so this makes me even more eager for when you publish your book!