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Here is the finished page 15. At first, I wanted to make those rascals as faceless shadows, but I wanted them to be really hateful, and a face makes that much easier, so I gave them faces at the end :D

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Gabriele

Oh, the assholes are so gonna pay for that...

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2026-09-05 18:00 Bastards. >:(
2018-06-14 17:18 Bastards. >:(

Bastards. >:(

Simone Writes

Kids tend to be cliché. 😅 They do not yet know what true evil looks like.

Alexey Belovolsky

And how do you find a proper job in such a terrible psychological state? Not every person is able to find a good workplace without the help of relatives and friends. Being an orphan, at the very bottom of the social hierarchy, with psychological problems and phobias, this is simply impossible.((

Zummeng

That's very true, and that was one reason I put that in the story. I don't know, it makes the future absolutely impossible to be better, yet you know that they were actually able to build up a better life. I think that's kind of the charm of this story for me. It's cruel in every way, but you know that at the end, all will be well :)

Simone Spinozzi

Personally i like it just because i know it will all go better, otherwise i would be squirming and biting my nails.

Alexey Belovolsky

Yes, yes, I remember that everything ended well. And it's great that the reader has the opportunity to remember this. However, reading Evie's memories, I can not help empathizing with the poor girl, who at the moment does not see any good future.