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Tree of Life - Book 1 pg. 63. (Patreon)

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2023-09-07 10:08:07
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2026-06
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Here's the finished page 63, and with that, Chapter 1 has officially ended, and we are off to Chapter 2! :D

Hope you like it ^^

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Joseph Purves

If this is the last page for chapter one, shouldn't there be a "To be continued..." in the bottom right corner, like Book Zero page 88 had?

pj wolf

...This makes me wonder if Luna had seen this day coming for as long as she had been in contact with her daughter... On a formatting standpoint: Unless you plan to do a 64th page with, like, an end slate or something, it may be wise to clue the reader in that this is the last page aside of mentioning it in the description

Joseph Purves

Congratulations on completing chapter one. Maybe later on in the story, could we see how Miralle, Chili, and Leopold got their reputation with the town folk in flashbacks instead of Nigel telling us? Remember this saying: "Show, don't tell." Will we meet any of the Imp gang members that Tristan was with later in the story? And is there any way to make something like the middle panel on book one page 18 less muddy? I did like book one overall, and wish you the best of luck with this story. Thank you.

Forge27

Lynus. The true heart of this chapter

StumpedMoose

And thus the long, perilous journey begins! Hopefully, nothing bad happens to Mira for Luna's sake.