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It seems like our waitress has survived round 1.

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ButterDoe

Fair's do. At 4AM when I should be sleeping I tend to get overly sentimental haha I blame having to write a 20 page paper on finding the meaning in Ferdydurke XD

Don Pretzel

Well, I think you'll do well with that, going on what you were able to pull out of this. Though I'd suggest using language like 'maybe it...' and 'it might perhaps...' and 'it seems' 'suggests' rather than always speaking definitively. That way you should come across more measured, and the writing less pretentious in its opinions and conclusions. That being said, I am not an expert on the subject. In fact I've never done well in any literary thing in academics.

ButterDoe

"suggests" sounds good, otherwise I "might perhaps" sounds pretentious ;p