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I won't spend too many words, here. Y'all know how much this means to me, by now.

Just- thank you if you'll decide to give this story of mine a chance. And please, be mindful of the warnings at the beginning. 🙏

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Manuel Bestetti

What a powerful prologue! I certainly don't have sympathy for the vampires, especially after this start. I don't know ANYTHING about the characters so I'll going in totally blind, but I'm intrigued by what will happen to this unnamed person 👀

Hiro

Holy shit, so exciting !!! 👀💖

Manon Szulc

Omg omg omg OMG!!!!! My stomach did summersaults when I saw the notification! And damn you did not disappoint! THIS IS SO GOOD 😭💕 I’m so freaking excited, I love a good vampire story and everything you have shown us so far promises that this one will be great! Great prologue and I can’t wait for more! 💛💛💛

acearohanda

BRO THEY JUST LEFT HIM TO BECOME A VAMPIRE WITH NO ONE TO LEAD HIM THROUGH IT WHAT KIND OF SIRES ARE THEY aaahh im so excited to see where this goes!!

KhajitTink

AIRA OMG!!!! I am so excited for this, and it already sounds so fucking amazing!!!! I love this!!

loveisintheAIRA

Oh god, I'm crying 😭 You're too kind to say all of this for such a little snippet 🤧 I hope you'll like the next chapters, too! 💖

loveisintheAIRA

Ahhhh yes!! Poor thing, they left him to die/turn like that, but well, there's an actual reason why 👀👀 I'm afraid you'll have to wait for the actual book to discover it, tho 🙈 Thank you so much for your comment, sweetie 🙏💘

Meena

This sounds fantastic. I love the start. I am really thrilled to see on what journey you are taking us.

Rashel Izro

Oh! Oh! I've been so excited I need to set aside time to get into it. I'm so glad you decided to go forwards with this project

Andie

Ahhh loved this! Definitely paints the picture!!! Can’t wait for more! Also if you need a beta I’d love to help! I write fan fiction and am a native English speaker. No worries if not though!! ☺️ I’m so very excited to see more of this story!!

loveisintheAIRA

I'm so happy too, I've never believed more into an original story I created. Thank you for the time you're willing to put into reading it! 🙏💗

loveisintheAIRA

Thank you so very much, Andie!! Your offer is really kind and I'll surely keep it in mind! 🙏🥺 For the time being, tho, I want to concentrate on the creative process. But when the day comes and the book is done, I will surely need a hand to revise & edit it! And if possible for my finances, I'd actually like to make it paid work. 🥰

Peter Shaw

Aira - well, its taken me two days to get to this (busy few days at work) but... Oh Wow! Totally worth the wait! Great little prologue! Poor Dario! (I'm assuming Dario, and not some other vampire) I kinda hope he got his wish of his parents crying over him (not for their POV of course, but his. .and hope they survived the war) nice bit of world building there! looking forward to more!

loveisintheAIRA

Sadly I can't answer any of your speculations, but with time you'll discover everything 👀💖 Thank you so much for your kind review!! 🥰

Peter Shaw

oh no, i'm just speculating for fun, don't expect/want answers! 🥰 you are VERY welcome!

Melissa Barragan

What a fantastic start! I am not so patiently waiting for what is coming!

Antonymmouse

Yes!! Yes!! Ugh this was such a thrilling tease, and I loved him grieving for his life and mother and father as he dies... what a good way to dip our toes into the story 🥰

loveisintheAIRA

I'm so happy you think so! Writing the beginning is always HARD. I'm glad it got your attention!! 🙏💜