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Too Happy Revisted (Patreon)

Published:
2021-07-01 05:04:42
Edited:
2021-07-01 05:35:27
Imported:
2026-10

Content

Here's another version of the comic I posted two days ago (view it here). For this one, I changed around the order and poses in the panels. Not sure if this reads funnier or not, but this gives you an idea of the kind of issues I experiment with when writing a comic. What do you think? Which one is better?

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Ezekiel Riemer

I personally feel this version is a bit better.

Peter U

I also think this one is better. The last picture without text let same space for imagination ;)

supatortoiseboy

I like this one better as well. I think the anxiety is more tangible with the pause at the end, the over eagerness of the control player to ruin his day is also stronger

Cardboard Crack

Thanks for the feedback everyone! This is why I love comics. Just with a slightly different ordering or timing of a comic, the joke can read very differently.