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    Rahl

    Im about halfway through writing a part 2

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Your Gem Draws Creator

    only now seen this 🙈 interested in hearing the story if you’re willing to share

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    Gimme a sec and I’ll grab the link

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mslhq7ASc-sMimJLUvF3PE6HkR-EU4lj4CMgF7haO8c/edit?usp=drivesdk

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    There you go

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    Rahl Anyone here familiar with Maria Lovette?
    Your Gem Draws Creator

    I’ll have to check her out. From that image alone I can tell she’s a fab Illustrator

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    Rahl Anyone here familiar with Maria Lovette?
    Rahl

    She’s got a handful of series she not only does the interiors on but also writes

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    Rahl Anyone here familiar with Maria Lovette?
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    Rahl Anyone here familiar with Maria Lovette?
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    Rahl Anyone here familiar with Maria Lovette?
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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    I’d be interested to hear any feedback

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Your Gem Draws Creator

    You’ve definitely got talent, I could visualise the whole thing! Do you write often?

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    Well thank you. I used to. Not much these days. If you were interested in bringing it to life visually, I could probably be convinced to do more again

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    It’d be nice to have an outlet

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    And even more fun to collab

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Your Gem Draws Creator

    Ahhhh that’s really cool. You for sure should write more. Especially if its something that you enjoy. You gotta follow your bliss. I create because i enjoy it. it helps that others do too. but i do it for me first. My schedule’s kinda full at the moment coming up to christmas n with up coming hospital apointments n all, but it would be something I’d be interested in trying at some point. I’ve never illustrated a story before though so it scares me a bit - my insecurities just peaked there haha  😂

    I’m about to lift the child from school here, so my evening’s about to be hectic, so if I don’t reply for a while that’s why! But I will get round to doing so. please feel free to nudge me though as I don’t always get chat notifs and I do accidentally ghost at times 🙈

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    Well, ive never written with the knowledge it’ll be illustrated, so that makes two of us I suppose lol

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    I mean, if you’re up for it though, I’ll keep writing for ya

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    Could always ask the patrons if they’d be interested in seeing full story series

    Part 2 has been finished…

    What’s everyone up to? Anything exciting going on?

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    BenjaminSpanklin

    That was very good. You have a talent for very thought driven, stream of consciousness, erotica, which can be hard to capture. My only note would be to keep editing. Keep cutting out that which doesn’t propel the reader forward, but honestly it is pretty close at this point.

    Thank you for sharing

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    Well thank you

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    Rahl

    Out of curiosity, what would you have cut?

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    Rahl I wrote up a short story last weekend and I could actually picture it in my head as if you had drawn it
    BenjaminSpanklin

    The paragraph I can’t see her face but I can hear her moaning as she uses my mouth. No not my mouth. Her mouth. She rented it. It’s hers until she is done with it. I have no say. Just like I had no say in Mommy renting it out.”

    For example: the above paragraph:It’s third person and doesn’t serve the narrative. It’s blocky and is disruptive to flow. Additionally, the ideas can be incorporated elsewhere without loss of narrative flow. This is just my opinion and I am only trying to help

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