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The System Apocalypse Comic #1 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-05-23 03:06:58
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Here's the link to download it. It's in PDF form . Download and use as necessary.As always. Don't share. This was an expensive process and it still isn't up on the most important site for comics (Comixology). That's going to take up to 3 months for them to REVIEW the file, nevermind the 8-12 weeks before they release it. Ugh.URL: http://www.mylifemytao.com/system-apocalypse-comic-1/Password: comicissue1

Comments

Saysca

Just something small I noticed while reading the comic, when John gains Ali it says 'World First', however, in the kindle version I have it says 'World Fourth'. Not a big deal, just thought I would point it out. Also, on page 11 there is a speech bubble coming from John that I think is meant for Ali as it discusses ambient mana levels.

Håvard

Page 11: "The ambient mana from reached a point where you could be added to the system" The bubble is pointing at John for that one. Page 24: "I think I just caught their interest" Who are they? I know from reading the book, but 'They' are not mentioned directly in the comic so I can only guess at the council, but from the book I know it is only the representatives. The simple solution is to change 'their' to 'someone's'.

Tao Wong

Mmm... I'm okay with that mistake. Heee. And ugh. I'll have to look at the speech bubble thing. *sighs and prods*

Tao Wong

Thanks. I'll probably leave the last one as is, having the little ambiguity works. :)