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Hello hello, I’m here bearing 17 more pages of comic! I'm realizing this has breached 31 pages in total now, goodness.

EDIT: with colour now, please enjoy! :P

I definitely had a blast drawing this one, J in particular with her absolute stank face. She might need that vacation. Finally got to the good bit where Tessa and J interact too, so I’m sure you know I'm giddy over that. There is a good 8-10 pages left to wrap this comic up and then we’ll head over to the reboot comic.

I’ll be working a little catchup on last months illustration request and sketch requests this week!

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Punchy

the devil horns on all the doormans except khan absolutely killed me. oh J you suck up. also is tessas body broken down becase of its just a badly built body or somthing else?

TheBones

A: J AND TESSA BONDING, GRAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I'M MELTING. Also is it intended for in the first image the bubble is cropped ? I couldn't read it that much

Pepaw

YEAAAA- and yes it’s supposed to get across that Khan isn’t listening

Pepaw

LMAO yea…. And for Tessa here, it’s a wombo combo of a few problems at once. not being able to repair consistently does not make for a happy zombie body.

IMNXIL

The environmental storytelling is amazing. The Popups in J’s visor, J’s tail position when Tessa’s nearby, Tessa’s offhand comment about her (Completely Valid) Mommy issues Fantastic ☺️

Pepaw

YAA thank youu!! :)

RTTH0U

The details in this are so good, like that one about J systems recognising Tessa (cyn's body) as a prior threat and recommending immediate egress... But also J What are you saying? This one is a Nepo baby but the the girl that grew up in a billionaires mansion with servants available to cater to her every need (be her stand ins for the loving family she lacked mainly) isn't?

Pepaw

YEAH LMAO, especially on earth, with Tessa she didnt care. but J really has it out for her here, considering she thinks its might be the Solver messing with everyone. she sees it as another way it squeezed into the ranks if you will. (She’d probably be impressed otherwise lol) J is not above being a hypocrite

dogexmachina

Love the detail of J's frustration with a job not getting done actually let her override Authority Compliance dot exe! Good for her. I bet she doesn't even realize how much she's pushing back on her own programming. Her calling Tessa a nepotism baby made me lose it, excellent way to break the tension for a moment, show that J is now forced to acknowledge where she places Tessa, and make the conversation flow. You're an excellent and efficient storyteller.

Bruhchantite

Oh this is SO good, I love everything about these pages! The expressions, the paneling, the writing, the characterisations!!! Amazing job I'm more impressed with every page you put out for us quq

Pepaw

YES im so glad that read! girl is on a TIGHT schedule, and this is going to ruin her plans -everyones plans- so she pushes through it. shes fighting herself always, I think finally making nice with Uzi would heal her a bit lol. and thank you! im so glad!

Pepaw

YAY!! Im glad you like it :)

Lucas Kotowski

Ah! oh man I LOVE all of the indicators that J gets from her visor, it's such an effective way to convey exactly what our audience perspective is. Also, they help so much in establishing mood and J's internal thoughts without requiring exposition or narration. It just pairs so well with your dynamic poses, facial expressions and excellent dialogue that I find it super compelling. Every scene with J is going to be a flurry of information that puts you right into her head, it's excellent!

Mr. Spooks

There’s so much love put into this and the detail is insane. Even the background characters have their own unique design and makes me want to learn more about them. You have truly cooked!

Pepaw

aww thank you!! Yeah I keep thinking about them being robots and what about that would differ from a regular human/WD conversation. particularly with J who I feel is better at not showing her hand/hides more things. thank you!! C:

Pepaw

heheh ty Spooks! I might actually snag Patrons OC's in the future to use for thiese BG characters

Lucas Kotowski

you're so right, it makes all the conversation so much more compelling because we get all this additional context

Lucas Kotowski

oh yeah it's a challenge to do a comic from the perspective of a character who hides away all of her feelings without internal narration giving the reader the info they need. but this is an excellent means of giving that info while preserving one of her main character traits!

Jacob Burns

Was it on purpose that we can't see the rest of J bubble on the first page?

Pepaw

yes!! its supposed to indicate that Khan isnt listening to her rambling

FrostbiteZ05 _

Decided to support you on here to see this comic early, worth it I'm kicking my feet rn

Pepaw

Heheee I hope to have the other one wrapped up soon! Hopefully with this one coloured!!