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Jazz was magically conjured together by the ultimate pirate artist, Wyvern. They also created Aga, Kai, and Pickle (originally name Prickle, but pickle made me laugh harder so I changed it.)

Legend has it that Aga & Kai were denizens of Edison Kingdom! They grew up in the Sunnyside Slums, eventually setting out to sea to steal things from pirates and RAFT and then sell it back to them! They happened to stumble on Pickle, who was added to this small crew of clever tradesmen. Eventually, one of their victims was the lone Jasmine Drake, who proceeded to chase them for weeks, until he finally caught up and asked them to join his pirate crew!

Back in March or so, I saw an OC designed by Wyvern and told them I'd put them in the world! I'm a man of my word so after reading their backstory document, I thought long and hard of where they'd be now, and one day the idea of Captain Drake hit me! The ideas started flowing, and it was the perfect crew for these OCs!  Since this honestly, I've asked some more friends about their Riptide OCs and have added them to the world! Hope they all show up one day.

Captain DrakeThe idea came to me in the gym as I was getting yolked on September 18th... I wanted to create a captain who had the ability to steal and/or mimic abilities from other people? That's kinda where it started, but then I thought like, what if it had to do with a musical kind of ki? You know where he's able to read arcane rhythm by physical touching someone or something crazy like that. I've mentioned an island powered by sound and music before when The Empress was an antagonist, and I've always WANTED a reason to go back, so having another character from the same place that could be an ally or need assistance in the future, or just invite them to the battle of the bands festival would be sick! Anyways, you can see I started thinking a lot about this character & got really stressed out when the boys were light-heartedly on a murderous path to kill him. LOL, to be fair that rolled was a super late night & I had a flight in just a few hours. I figured it out though, as one does.

Anyways, I won't get into the backstory and stuff, but I knew this character would be a POC because a good portion of Dal Segno, his hometown island, is. Of course, real life races don't exist in D&D, and this fact makes me feel a bit less concerned portraying non-player characters with brown complexion. They're just human in Mana. Or Fish. The only two races. Humans and Fish. Okay there are also bird people, dog people, cat people, and giants. But still. Humans. And. Fish. That said, I will do my best to make you guys that watch the show feel comfortable, represented, and respected! I've also been sitting on design idea and potential of vitiligo on characters. I think in Jazz's case it's considered segmented, just one side of the body. I could be wrong, but that's what I researched. I also asked for specific spots on Jazz's body because of the research. I know the disease really effects people and especially their mental health, so I wanted to show a character with a similar condition that represented it, who is infinitely confident in their own skin, and went through a lot to earn that confidence. Even though such a thing could be cured in a fantasy world, and maybe not even exist, Jazz chose to keep it apart of themselves. Also yes, it does stylistically resemble a skull on their face, which may be unrealistically awesome, but I love it, okay? LOL

Another fun fact, Jasmine Drake is trans.  In the world of Mana, and possibly other fantasy worlds, there is magic that allows one to completely alter their physical form. Transmogrification is a spell that does just this, but permanently. I first witnessed it during campaign 2 of Critical Role and was like, holy shit yes this should just EXIST. Unfortunately the real world isn't as magical, but for Jazz it is, and they found the means to undergo this transmutation ritual to put them in the body they wanted.

I recall messaging a lot of this to Wyvern, and them saying they loved every single word and watched like a 5 episode show in their mind LOL. I really enjoy creating NPCs that make the world alive. Final fun fact, Captain Drake is a name I've been wanting to use since its inspired by real life pirate Francis Drake. How could I not use it for a musician when Drake is a real word famous rapper. The parallels are too funny. Did you guys know that the rapper drake is into hentaiOkay, with all that out of the way. How do you think all this effected the design? DESIGN

Just based on description and backstory, Wyvern created a perfect face and expression of Jazz within a day. From there I described distinguishable facial features, and researched a good descriptor for the skin color which we landed on "claret," although a bit warmer than what you get by googling that. Essentially a warm brown, with red undertones.

Afterwards I had a joyride of searching through Pinterest for reference of hairstyles, and they are all genuinely so fucking cool. I was looking for shaved sides and braids that were either tight cords (box braids I think?) or locs. Also asked for them to have beads, brackets, or other accessories to the hair.Because Empress Malice was an inspiration to Jazz, and their eye color was red, I wanted Jazz to have red in their hair.

After this I described the height build, short king with acrobatic muscles, and then talked about tattoos. Because there are no surgery scars, my idea was to have the tattoo on their exposed arm wrap under the chest, just for symbolism. Wyvern is the one who designed it to be a musical staff with Jasmine flowers. Which by the way, is genius, and makes me a little emotional haha. Just really good ideas all around. The clothes were a little difficult because I wanted Jazz to have his own unique swag and basically pioneer a look that you wouldn't otherwise see. Of course, also wanted it to fit his martial art brawler fighting style and still fit within the pirate theme of the world. Sorta like a modernization of a pirate outfit. I wanted you to look at Jazz and think, "god damn he loves himself, and god damnit he should." I sent pictures of crop tops with varying cut outs, tall buckled leather boots, leather pants, etc. Pinterest is just a great place to look for reference, by the way. Wyvern told me my outfit ideas were an unusual combo, but then they nailed it anyways so idc I win! Wyvern added a lot of their own ideas to this design as well, such as the Jolly Roger, the jacket, the spiked glove! With the initial ideas sketched out, I picked my favorite combination of them, and he was pretty much finished! SORRY FOR THE NOVEL

If you have any questions about Captain Drake, please let me know! If its not a spoiler, Ill do my best to answer.Please look forward to the next break down of a design or concept art process! They may not happen every episode, but I will try my best.- Grizzly

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Drag0nAtlas

I stood up and cheered when i read he was trans. WE WIN ANOTHER DAY but seriously, coolest character design ever

The Trash Train

Drake's a bi and trans icon, 2 for 1 deal

ZoeTheLad

They look so awesome 😭

Kx__04

SICKKKK

Ace_has_Greed

If riptide was a video game this is the crew I’d choose to join

Caden Lind

Jazz is def one of my favorite npcs so far, i love their energy

melonmeelon

Unironically one of my new all-time favorite npcs I love Jazz sm

axel

I would die for all of them within a heartbeat

Kai Strong

*lip bites in a feeling represented kind of way*

bella

hey captain jasmine drake (biting lip louder than the other pirates)

Nina

wow, amazing!!!!!!

Mistrex

Captain drake is the best fr, reading about him here made me so unbelievably happy <3 i knew what he was,, 👁️👁️

Alex

as a trans person it makes me so incredibly happy to have a trans character on this show, and that they’re a confident and proud person too, thank you so much literally on the verge of tears(in a good way)

Ozzy!

god I cannot express how glad I am to have a trans character and that you put in the time to make sure you were representing that *and* everything else about captain drake :( I love him so much

Toobz

Oh my god the amount of representation is immaculate. This is what makes me love JRWI so damn much. I never feel like I'm unable to relate to the characters in some capacity. God the attention to detail for this character hit me. This is absolutely beautiful Grizzly and I'm sure everyone else appreciates this as much as I do.

Isaacthedruid

It’s make me so damn happy to see a character with vitiligo and to see one that is explicitly mentioned and said to be confident in it. I struggled with my own a lot as child, both mental health wise and the physical health (and oh god the extreme sunburns in the summer). I’ve had the disorder since I was 6 and it’s been quite the journey to live with but I’m so damn happy to see it represented. And also on a not cisgender character too! So much good representation in one character and the fact you put so much research into your representation makes it so authentic instead of just slapping some patches on their skin and calling it a day. Just thank you, such a cool character for such a cool series

missimperius

‘god damn he loves himself and goddammit he should’ is EXACTLY the energy that jazz brings, one of my favourite npcs fr

Robyn

Not to distract from all the love for Drake and all the Jazz pirates because DAMN do they deserve it. But has anyone else noticed that Pickle is carving Pickle wuz here into to floor boards? But with an image of a pickle, not the word. Lol that little detail made my morning.

wren2144

Weeping. Sobbing. Crying at the existence of a trans character in riptide. You have no idea how amazing this makes me fucking feel bro. I fucking love representation 😭😭

UndeadBeanz

I hold Jasmine Drake so close to my heart. Jrwi got me into DnD and it's the first time I've actually found stories with vast accurate loving representation in them. Especially JRWI characters, I always feel seen thank you so much there's not enough words to express it. Thank you thank you thank you!!!

Silver N Gold

The monkey is my new favorite npc

haz

captain drake is so COOL!! all these little fun facts have made my day, and it's so fucking cool to have trans rep in riptide!!

SireToad

Grizz really does the most. Respectable.

Zocramble

His design goes so hard. It’s always interesting to hear people’s design process and what goes into making one, so this was really insightful to read

Will

Did grizzly just use they for malice /genq or am I reading that wrong. Also I’m crying real tears over the representation in this crew. Not only is jazz an amazingly written character, but you clearly put effort into making sure the representation was written correctly. And the tattoo under the chest to represent the scars had me bawling my eyes out /pos

Keyia

A BIRD IN BOOTS??? And they said it couldn't be done

Tabbety

*bites lip in an “omg cryingwyvern is so good at art” way*

You-topia

I love Jazz and I love Captian Drake and I love Riptide and Riptide makes me love everything

Ryan Foster

*bites lip in a way that clearly conveys that i would die for this entire crew*

Ace Hutson

I think he likes this character

EmberAnimates

I am so unbelievably in love with Captain Jasmine Drake you have no idea. THE CONFIDENCE. THE VOICE. THE UNNECESSARY LIP BITING. THE TRANS TATTOOS. I cannot wait for this crew to make a comeback they’re probably one of my favorite sets of NPCs to date (Also can’t wait for Chip, Jazz, and Lizzie to be in the same room together, it’s gonna go so off the walls so fast /pos)

Cherub

this is so amazingly in depth about his character design i am having the time of my life w this, i absolutely adore Captain Jasmine Drake so so so much

CloudyOrchards

This made me so damn happy to read. I love all the casual representation in this man, but he's also just fleshed out and alive and not just token rep. The trans(that's me!) and vitiligo rep makes me so happy, especially being on a character that loves himself so much like ahhh. Biting my lip rn in a way that conveys my deep platonic love for this man and his crew

FlubberMcDubber

Having a D&D character with vitiligo on his face he just like me fr fr

Ryah Green

FUCKYEAH HES TRANS LETS GOO

DJKawaii

grizzly and cryingwyvern i would throw my entire crew's gold off the ship to the tax collecters for this man *bites lip in a please have more interactions with him kind of way*

Satyrn.exe

genuinely brillant character work, both you and wyvern! drake feels very alive and well rounded, and has honestly the funnest npc/pc chemistry w the riptide gang so far i adore him

alexarooni

its so cool to see the design process of characters. great job wyvern and grizz!

Kidd Klam

Love this design, I’m way too hype to see this rn

Eggyneer

thank u for de art

mocco

these are genuinely so cool!! i love seeing the art and reading about the design process it’s a super super cool patreon perk i’m really glad you started doing :P

Mike Rawch

I'm glad you changed the name to Pickle, it suits him in a cute way - Also I guarantee you that Chip would've started calling him "Prick" in 0.5 seconds. Also Kai looks like way more of a badass than I was picturing - in a cool way

EaseeCheesee

Omg I love when Riptide invents transgender people 😍 All jokes aside, im very glad to have a trans character in the series! Its nice to feel even more represented, considering the plethora of other LGBT rep!! Great work!!

Miles

tearing up a little over the subtle trans representation—i appreciate how much research you do into various topics and it’s very interesting to see your thought process and inspirations.

Will

I’M GONNA FUCKING CRY CONFIRMED TRANS CHARACTER THANK YOU GRIZZLY

clownery

tboy swag thru the roof

kupu

i got so excited when i saw the art in the episode ngl :) and whenever i got to know them, i got really excited!! hoping to see him sometime in the future :)! also love the respect! SHIT LIKE THIS MAKES PEOPLE SO FUCKING GIDDY GRIZZ AND YOU FUCKING KNOW THAT-

figgiun

i love him so dearly,,,,, i hope we get to see more of him in the near future!! i love seeing the process of creating him as a character it just makes things so much more fleshed out n cool,,, definitely one of my favorite npcs from some of my favorite episodes!!

Ashton Rei

The novel is so much appreciated! I don't think I've ever been more excited to find out a character is trans than this. Captain Drake is so cool! I loved him from the moment he was introduced and to find out we have something in common makes me so happy. Love these long posts!