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I've tweaked the information and corrected a lot of mistakes, this is the updated version. I just need to fix the cover. I'm getting some quotes for A5 size, as I don't think the zine needs to be too big. I think small enough to carry around or to have nearby for reference when stuck on something. Let me know if you want a larger size! 

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Marcelle Slote

this is incredible!!! so excited to be receiving mine omg

Kazia Harman

I'm so excited about this, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the cover :D I think A5 would be great although maybe print a page at home to double check that the font size and everything works. I noticed just a few small things as I scrolled through – I hope you don't mind! P. 4, left page: a black rectangle has appeared in the bottom left corner (I think from when you removed the keratin sentence) P. 4, right page, middle left: Practice --> Practise P. 13, left page, top right: Using a custom brush --> Use a custom brush P. 14, right page, top centre: by --> but Lastly (and really sorry I didn't notice this before!), the capitalisation of the titles is quite inconsistent – I've made some suggestions below: Title page: How to draw BIRDS of the passerine order P. 4: Bird Head and Beak P. 6: Bird Feet and Digits P. 11: Bird Wings: Anatomy P.12: Bird Wings: Open Wing P. 14: Bird Wings: Closed Wing P. 15: Bird Wings: Flight and Flightless P. 17: Silhouette: Composition I also noticed while checking this that the word "bird" in the titles is also inconsistent – it made sense to include it when you posted the pages individually online but I wonder if it's needed in the titles inside the book given it's a book about birds (e.g. Bird Wings: Anatomy --> Wings: Anatomy)? This is purely a suggestion though and completely up to you!

crowartist

Aww thank you so much for your help <3 I was thinking the same about the Bird thing so willl probably edit those out. I'm also thinking, maybe it will need page numbers and a contents page?

Kazia Harman

You're welcome! I realised after sending that comment that removing "bird" from the titles could create a challenge with reformatting to make up for the lost space but I hope it goes well if you do decide to go ahead with that! I think page numbers certainly are a great idea, and a contents page would be good if you have space although not a requirement :)