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How to draw birds book (Patreon)

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2021-07-01 14:39:56
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2021-07
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I've tweaked some pages and added two more pages (feet and tails) to complete the book! I've added the file as a PDF below. I'm open to any reviews and feedback too! All my Patreons (4 months+) will get a physical paper copy in the post so if you spot any typos or odd things let me know! If you don't see your name or want your name changed drop me a message! 

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Kazia Harman

I've had a read through and checked for typos – I hope this is okay! I edit texts as part of my day job so this is second nature to me! The advice and diagrams are amazing :) Patron page: every-one --> everyone P.4, left page, top paragraph: should be a comma after However P. 4, left page, bottom: missing full stop after keratin sentence P. 4, right page at the top: quicke --> quick Same page, under Expression: whether its --> whether it's P. 5, left page at the top: eye center --> eye centre (for consistency with the UK spelling elsewhere on the page) Repetition of the bit about keratin on pp. 4 and 5 (it fits a bit better on p. 5) P. 5, right page: inconsistent capitalisation of cranial kinesis P. 5, right page, bottom: flange's --> flanges P.6, left page, bottom: practicing --> practising Same page: missing full stop on bottom sentence P. 7, left page, bottom: practice --> practise P. 7, right page, bottom right text: comma after "straight" should be a full stop P. 8, left page, top: "which allows them to lay eggs" - you might want to put "allows birds to lay eggs", or else it sounds a bit like the bones lay eggs! (This is optional though) Same page: "Birds have the heaviest leg bones" - it's unclear what this means. Are their leg bones heavier than their other bones? Or are their leg bones the heaviest out of all animals (maybe in comparison to full body weight?) Same paragraph: this is picky, but you might want to move knee to the next line to be on the same line as "(2)". Same page, bottom text: the birds --> the bird's (or the birds' if plural) P. 8, right page, bottom text: should this say "The images below show the range [...]"? P. 9, right page, bottom: inbetween --> in between P. 10, left page, top: practice --> practise Same page, bottom left: maybe move the text closer to the black arrow if possible P.10, right page, centre: center --> centre P. 11, left page, centre: affect --> effect P. 11, right page: the thumb is labelled twice in the top diagram - I'm not sure if this is deliberate? Same page, top right: primaries are embedded --> is embedded (as this connects to "Each feather" it's singular) P.12, right page, right side: eliptical --> elliptical Same page, left side: seperate --> separate Same page, right side: seperate --> separate Same page, bottom right: capitalise stall for consistency Same page, bottom right: infront --> in front P.13, left page, top right text --> this should be one sentence P.14, left page, top paragraph: the capitalisation of Primary, Secondary and Elbow seems out of place, I don't think they're capitalised elsewhere Same page, left side: ontop --> on top Same page, bottom right: center --> centre P.14, right page, top: by practicing --> but practising Same paragraph: memorize --> memorise P.15, left page, top: ontop --> on top P.16, left page, top: viewers --> viewer's Same page: missing full stops on bottom two sentences P.16, right page, top: insert comma before etc Same paragraph: its important --> it's important Same page, just below that paragraph: the birds focus --> the bird's focus Same page, right white text: the word "direction" is cut off P.17, top paragraph: comma should be semicolon (;) Same page, middle text: delete "the" in "the more negative space" P.17, right page, top: silhouette's --> silhouettes Side note: I found the image order on this page a bit confusing but that might just be me!

crowartist

Wow thank you so much Kazia!! This is excellent!! I will tweak it with all your suggestions <3 thank yoou!

Kazia Harman

You’re welcome, I’m more than happy to help!

crowartist

Yes you will get a physical copy without paying extra or anything since you've been a Patron for 6 months! <3 Thank you!

Johanna

Hi! I just found your Patreon and absolutely love everything you post. ☀️ Would it be possible to buy the paper version of the booklet as I’m too new a member to receive it? 🙂 It would be really great!

crowartist

Hi Johanna! I think it may be next month before I get the book made as I'm still tweaking with it here and there lol! But I'll keep you updated on it's progress! All Patreons will get a coupon if they wish to buy extra physical copies!