fortune cookies minicomic wip (Patreon)

I had a funny idea for a small mini-comic, it will probably only be two pages, but we'll see how it goes. The idea is that a small group of friends gathered at one of their houses to hang out and someone brought mysterious fortune cookies, and after the guys ate them, the words on them started to come true (to be honest, at first I just wanted to draw a huge demon, but while I was drawing it, this plot popped into my head).

I didn't quite manage to finish this shot today because I was too focused on the details, so I'll post the WIP version, but I'm waiting for your ideas and suggestions in the comments. Do you need more pages or is this and the starting one enough? I think I could show the overall transformation sequence.