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Someone wanted a continuation of Jeannie's thread and I was in a position where I needed some extra cash, so here we go.

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PrivateXimmy

Yeah, that was absolutely *fantastic.* The choice to really hone in on their relationship, both interpersonally and physically, absolutely worked in the stories favor! Like the notion that them, the absolute peak of constant 24/7 pleasure, was the “darkest” days of their relationship is so utterly cute and adorable. Like the story is explicit that their relationship is **entirely** transactional in its wants and needs, yet the experience of that exchange *together* is what made it special for them. Equal parts cute, funny, and almost awe inspiring for their characters! And the resolution! To strip all else away, a perpetual union of ramping pleasure, beret of all distraction, forever supported by a capitalistic exploitation support network entirely independent of any personal involvement, simply thriving and supporting the two as a **bi-product** of their miracle connection: it’s just so great. Despite having the capacity for conversation through their various augmentations, the two reaching such a symbiosis of give and take that it’s no longer even necessary? Yeah, you fucking cooked with this. And when it ever reaches deviantart eventually I’ll repost this there too, cause god damn! You took this prompt and just *ran* with it. But also, I really think it shows how much you’ve improved as a *writer* since the days of the original calling. The focus on exponential growth, key to the authors fetish is obviously still there, but focusing on the personal and interpersonal made this all feel so much more real. Welcome back!