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Scrapped layout from pg283 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-09-09 10:00:08
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2026-09
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I actually fixed this page just a few days before it went live, and wanted to share it because I redrew a whole panel! I always hated how anti-climatic the original was so some last minute reformatting was needed. It's still not that good, I think I could've done better with it, but it's still better than this was. But enjoy this extra Usma + Runi panel?

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Mistclaw

I like both versions, but the new one has so many more little details than the original :3

rattGS

My main grudge with the original was the fact the first panel was so small and unimpactful! But I did prefer the original long lower panel since I had to squeeze it a lot to make room.

Cathy

I see that usma got some mud on her between your two ideas. I like that added detail

Ollieosa

I like how Runi is looking at Usma in the first panel, but yeah the revised version gives a lot more detail and mood to the situation

Mistclaw

Usma's introduction in the new one is much more impactful. I actually gasped aloud when I saw it, so very good choice on switching it up! :3