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The sensation of the void outside my senses reached a peak when I opened the door, once again revealing the glowing cosmic dust of infinity beyond the doorway, where there should have been a simple bathroom.

I could feel something out there, an almost magnetic attraction that drew me to take a step forward into the emptiness.

The void supported me, and I found myself standing in an ocean of nothing, staring up at…nothing. There was nothing there, but the emptiness drew my attention all the same, radiating strange concepts that I could feel reorienting my perception of reality in real time.

A gurgling noise to my right caught my attention, and when I turned my head, I saw innumerable doorways, with innumerable people standing in them, staring at the same spot that I had been.

Some of the doorways didn’t even have people, containing strange inhuman creatures, although most of them were human.

Curious, I turned my head to the left, studying the doors that receded into infinity. There were no humans there. Only alien creatures of various shapes and sizes.

A thought occurred to me.

Did my placement in the chain of doors indicate that I was the first human to experience this phenomena…or the last?

-Excerpt From the notes of Professor John Stevens

***Three years ago***

“Magneton,” Solaris said in the calmest voice he could muster, “I need you to step away from the magnetic infuser.”

“I can feel it just outside of my vision, Solaris. There’s nothing outside this room but it. Behind every door.” Magneton said, shivering in delight, his eyes, ears and nose bleeding profusely. “It’s too big for us to interact with as we are now. it’s on another plane of existence, the human to our ants. You think it’s distant, when distance has no meaning to it. The gravitation isn’t its body, but its attention.”

“O…kay,” Solaris said, wincing as his head began to throb. “Magneton, your wife is afraid you’re gonna hurt yourself. You remember your wife?”

Solaris hoped the strong bonds could pull Magneton out of the spiral he seemed to be in.

“In order to communicate with it, we have to become higher dimensional beings ourselves,” Magneton said. “That’s what the magnetic infuser will do. I’ll become an entity that surpasses human understanding, composed entirely of thought and living, self-replicating magnetic waves. I’ll leave this reality behind and commune with The Tide in person.”

“Jerry.” Solaris said slowly, “You have to come back to your wife. What you’re doing is going to hurt her.”

Magneton paused and glanced back at Solaris, looking him in the eye for the first time since Solaris had arrived to check on him at the behest of his wife.

Magneton had always been a petty, jealous cape, obsessed with honing his modest Tinker abilities, and furious at anyone who surpassed him. Solaris should have guessed he’d try to find a way to expand his powers.

His gaze now, held none of Jerry’s spiteful joie de vivre. It was almost sad.

“I’ll miss her.”

Magneton turned around and walked towards the ominously humming machine, his arms spread wide to fit into the depression that matched his form perfectly.

“NO!” Solaris unleashed a beam of scouring light. He couldn’t allow Magneton to do…whatever the hell he was doing.

When the light faded, all that was left of Magneton was a human-shaped lump in the machine, rendered into solid metal fused with the machine itself.

Did I…miss?

Magneton should’ve been turned to ash, not iron.

Solaris called an all-hands on deck emergency and waited a few days for the other shoe to drop. But nothing came of it. Eventually Solaris just chalked it up to a Tinker hopped up on Tide-madness that forgot to carry the one, turning himself to iron instead of a being of pure magnetic waves.

Or maybe he succeeded, and that’s all that’s left of his former body.

Either way, the status quo had been maintained.

***Paradox***

“So from a picture of Magneton walking out of a bank after stopping a robbery, we’ve got a fairly accurate estimate of the man’s height and dimensions,” Hardcase said, studying the humanoid lump in the massive contraption.

“That’s him, isn’t it?”

“All the proportions are identical, is all I’m saying,” she said with a shrug.

Perry pursed his lips and glanced between the disabled gramophone and the dead guy in the big engine.

“Why did his wiki say he was killed in battle when he obviously went insane and tried to…I don’t know, romance a machine of dubious origin?” Perry wondered to himself.

“Propaganda, probably.” Heather said with a shrug. “If he’s dead, he’s dead. The higher ups didn’t need to freak the public out with the real story of how it went down.”

“Man, tinkers are a crazy bunch,” Jetset said, “I mean, why make a trap that only targets people fluent in binary?”

“It wasn’t a trap,” Perry and Hardcase said simultaneously.

“If it walks like a duck,” Jetset said, shrugging.

“I managed to get into the main console,” Hardcase said. “There’s a file folder with hundreds of image files in it, labeled ‘Professor John Stevens’. I of course, did not look at them.”

“Who’sat?” Jetset asked.

“Professor Replica!” all three of them said, glaring at the ignorant buffoon.

“Anyway, my best guess is Magneton was experimenting with encoding professor Replica’s notes in multiple layers of obfuscation.” Hardcase said.

“Oh! So he was thinking if the information was slower to digest and took more of the brain to do it, it would be more diffused and less likely to cause…” Perry gestured at the lump. “That.”

“So what did the gramophone say?” Jetset asked.

“Don’t remember,” Perry said, shaking his head.

“Me neither.” Hardcase added. “Also, dumb question.”

“Manic’s gone and I gotta be the dumb one now,” Jetset said with a shrug.

“Anyway, it can be assumed the information is astronomy-related and can cause serious damage to the casual observer.” Hardcase said.

“Yeah, but whywould he do this?” Wraith asked.

The tiny Tinker shrugged. “I’unno. Maybe he was trying to invent a technique to make astronomy safer?”

“Nah, that doesn’t sit right. The way this guy’s lair is put together feels mean and selfish,” Perry said, as a thought occurred to him. “Maybe he was trying to find a way to become a more powerful Tinker.”

Hardcase raised a brow.

“Think about it. Professor Replica was the most powerful Tinker ever. He’s the benchmark against whom other Tinkers are measured. I think Magneton thought maybe he could use the notes to recreate some of that power.”

“Well, he obviously fumbled it,” Heather said.

“Truth.” Perry said.

They stood around, solemnly studying the corpse embedded in the huge, mysterious machine for a while longer.

“Who else wants to tear this lair apart for goodies?” Perry said, raising his hand.

“Ooh, me, me!” Hardcase said, hopping in place and barely reaching his collarbone.

The rest of the process of tearing the lair down went smoothly. After they were sure all the traps had been disabled and the entire area defanged, they allowed the much-subdued Manic to explore at his leisure.

First they hauled out all the portable tech, saved anything that looked interesting, and put the rest on the Tinker Marketplace as a Lair Estate Sale, Caveat Emptor.

The Caveat Emptor was important because they had no idea if some of the tech was trapped or not. Sure, it drove the price down, but it was still a massive haul, and they each pocketed a cool half-mil once bidding died down.

Perry stripped the walls, ceiling and floor down to the concrete, running detectors over every square inch to make sure he didn’t miss anything, then re-finished the lair in more inexpensive materials, minus the landmines.

He used the LCC to separate the lair into its constituent rooms, floating dozens of feet apart from each other high in the air as they shuffled, making bystanders stop and gawk for the handful of minutes it needed to do the work. He cut out the gym and shower rooms, and switched their placement so that they jutted off to the side and his lab led directly into the new space, effectively tripling the size of his new lair.

Perry got a letter forwarded to him from his lawyer for damages to the laundromat totaling about two hundred thousand dollars, which stung a bit, but he still made out like a bandit.

Not only from the sale of Magneton’s gear, but also the raw materials he’d scraped up off the walls, and the mind-bogglingly strong magnetic gizmos they’d retained to study.

Perry got some interesting ideas from the gear, but he kind of hit a wall when Magneton’s tech delved beyond what was naturally possible.

Hardcase on the other hand, seemed to be taking to it like a fish to water. Three days later, she excitedly showing him a prototype robot arm connected and powered by solid magnetism.

Pretty sure it doesn’t work like that, but okay.

The model arm was composed of the primary anchor, the elbow, and the hand, each separated by several inches of air.  From what he understood, Hardcase had deciphered how Magneton had warped reality with his Tinker abilities to create laser-focused magnetic fields that only manifested in specific places, their field turned inward, rather than outward.

Little floating whirlpools of magnetic energy. Impossible in any other situation.

“Can you imagine how much weight I could drop if I got rid of the supporting structures in the arms and legs?” Hardcase said, coming over to where Perry was working on his magical computer experiments.

“A thousand pounds?” Perry said.

“Maybe! And the way the anchors work, they’ll transfer nearly a hundred percent of the energy of a punch or kick. Joints are no longer the weak point in transferring kinetic force.”

“So you’re gonna weigh less and punch harder?” Perry asked.

“Heck yeah!” Hardcase said, doing a little dance.

“What’s the energy consumption like?” Perry asked, concerned about how much energy it might take to float her limbs.

“It’s LESS!” Hardcase squealed with joy and tapped his chest while she spoke.

“They actually use less power than typical motors and it takes almost none to maintain their position!” she said as she stepped away. “My newest mechsuit is gonna kick some serious butt!”

“Awesome!” Perry gave her a thumbs up as she moonwalked through the lab.

RIIING! The tiny girl’s pants started ringing, prompting her to fish out her phone.

“Yeah?” Hardcase answered her cell phone. “Alright, I can be there in half an hour.” She hung up and turned back to Perry “Titan says there’s gonna be a turf war tonight. We’re gonna do damage control.”

“Good luck. Stay safe.” Perry said nodding. If Paradox and Wraith weren’t explicitly requested to come it would be very rude to show up anyway.

They weren’t on the same team, after all.

Hardcase waved goodbye and started trotting up the stairs, heading to where her mechsuit was parked out back of the motel.

Perry shrugged and turned back to his project.

He had taken Areonite, divvied it up and mixed it with several dozen kinds of contaminants to modify its conductivity, and extruded each of them into a wire. He was now attempting to make a tiny circuit-board that could do some simple calculations. If he could make that happen, then he could turn it into a floating armament and maybe create a magical computer connected to his mind.

Which would be awesome and a great starting point towards making completely magically controlled armor.

Once he found a combination that worked, he could streamline the process with CAD and 3-D printing.

Perry flipped the magnifying goggles back down and picked up where he left off with the soldering tool.

***Natalie AKA Hardcase***

Natalie slumped inside the staircase, leaning against the wall, her heart pounding in her chest.

I can’t believe I touched him!

Something was off with her recently. There was this turbulent sensation in her body that bubbled to the surface and forced her to act.

Sometimes, she felt like she was going to trip and fall off the side of the earth if she didn’t steady herself on someone. This was solved by resting her fingertips on them for a moment, but this presented difficulties, obviously.

Natalie didn’t want to lose the respect of Wraith and Paradox, but she kept touchingthem, and sometimes, it felt like the words bubbling up from inside weren’t under her control.

She was finding it difficult to keep quiet when that was the appropriate thing to do. It just bubbled up from inside and she had to say something.

Is this love…or am I losing my mind?

There it is again, Natalie thought as she climbed the stairs, the bubbling sensation filled her lungs and threatening to drive her crazy if she didn’t say something.

She gripped the door for support as she exited Paradox’s lair.

“They’re out of my league,” she sighed, letting the bubbling sensation out in a carthartic moment that felt like stretching out a cramp.

“I don’t really think that’s the case, you’re at least as cool as Perry and Heather.” Brendon said, giving her a thumbs up from the reception desk where he and Sophie were going over the list of jobs for the day.

Oh god. My life is over.

“I’m not a slut!” Natalie blurted.

Brendon frowned, cocking a brow. “I…don’t think you are?”

“Brendon, would you mind taking care of the pool?” Sophie asked, eyeballing Natalie as she hyperventilated.

“Sure, ma’am,” The oversized teen cheerfully grabbed the bucket of cleaning supplies and pool net, heading out with a bounce in his step.

“Now,” Sophie said once Brendon was gone. “You wanna tell me where all…this, is coming from?”

Natalie shook her head vigorously.

“Okay,” Sophie pulled out a business card and tucked it in Natalie’s pocket. “My cell phone number’s on the bottom if you want to talk. I’ve got thousands of years of experience in counselling.”

“Aren’t you an angel?” Natalie asked, steadying herself against Sophie. “Where did you get a cell phone?”

“The same place as everyone else?” Sophie said with a hint of a smile.

“Oh.” Natalie said, her heartbeat gradually calming down as she realized that Brendon didn’t understand and Sophie would never use it against her.

“I…I gotta go do the crime-fighting thing,” she said, heading for the parking lot.

“Good luck, stay safe!” Sophie waved, her business card burning against Natalie’s thigh through her pocket.

Comments

Macronomicon

Bit of a fragmented chapter, Apologies...But I DID write a whole chapter in one day, which is awesome! I picked very Mild Tourettes, which can ALSO include impulsive touching. Two for one, amiright?

Gavriel

I approve, although I would prefer it require hugging 😉; alot harder to hide that way, even better if part of it was not being aware it was weird, while being Very aware of the person being hugged But this is much more realistic

Rotary

A fan favorite addition, it seems

0xFFF1

Save that for later if her Stability drops or if her Attunement raises again. The deterioration should be stable until it hits the beginning of the downward spiral.

Macronomicon

Yeah, the idea was to start small. Can’t reel back stuff that’s already over the top.

SunderGoldmane

That’s going to be interesting to reconcile with her being a mech pilot, because she can’t touch anyone while inside. I can imagine in the future that any extended time in the mech may be followed by a dire need to touch people or be touched. She may need to start wearing some kind of full body compression suit as part of her getting into her mech as a kind of way to semi alleviate that same grounding action? If you want to get weird then you could have Perry’s skin control board installed into her mech and she can touch it any time she gets that urge. If you want to get really REALLY weird then make a compression suit out of Perry skin. It could function as a kind of backup control board for Perry and ground nat.

RepossessedSoul

Personally, I don't like the idea of using mental illness as a character trait, and I don't find mental illness attractive. Thats because I've dated someone with a mental illness (CPTSD, Depression, Anxiety, and PNES). A lot of people think that it is neat or attractive to date someone that is broken, and, its funny in a dark humor sort of way, think 'they can fix them'. However, the only person that can fix someone is themselves. No matter how much time you drop, no matter how much effort you put into someone, none of it matters unless they take the relevant steps to fix things themselves. So, personally, I don't find anything about giving a character a psychological destabilization that results in physical intimacy. That shit is fuckin skeevy. Idea to counter just the criticism though, maybe that recording implanted the equivalent of a mental logic bomb and if the listeners do not possess enough of a connection to this reality they will slowly have their connection degraded to the point of seeing what is behind The Tide. Like some sort of Cthulu thing where before listening to that recording they all had some form of shielding via ignorance, but because of the message being implanted in their heads they now have this time bomb waiting to go off and turn them crazy. This could be pivoted into Perry having to level up his Stability and figuring out a way to save those exposed to the recording, and Hardcase discovering that her urge to touch people isn't from some sort of weird physical attraction. Its from her subconscious realizing it needs some form of anchor to keep it focused and not looking at the shit behind the curtain. Idea on how this could be tied together is that Perry starts seeing more trippy shit and tries to build a machine that identifies when he is having an episode so he can track down and quantify the stimuli that cause him to Walk the Planes so to say. This works but he keeps getting weird readings that he can't explain, until he realizes that he isn't the only one Seeing Beyond the Veil. He eventually figures out that Hardcase, and everyone else that heard the Call from the recording, is ALSO getting slowly dragged into insanity. Could have one of the other characters suffer a character break as their mental resilience wasn't high enough to withstand things as long as Perry and Hardcase. He has to come to the determination of either hiding his knowledge of what is going on or coming clean with Hardcase and trusting her/hoping she isn't too far gone into her mind's coping mechanism. Which can be used to raise the connection and level of relationship they have. Just so long as the mental illness isn't used as the defining characteristic of the female character, because that's some low brow incel shit. Just an idea to try and divert from the typical Shounen HS anime level of relationships that typically happen in your fictions (recently) and so a female characters defining trait isn't turning from a shy nerdy girl to someone that the only treatment for her mental illness is a dose of the Main Characters peen.

Macronomicon

I grok this and will try not to make it weird. Keep speaking up and prevent me from being skeevy, man. I need people to give me this kind of shit on these comment boards.

RepossessedSoul

Thanks, you are a really gifted writer and have some fantastic ideas on powersets/viewpoints on things and I've consistently enjoyed your fictions. I always get a giggle at some of the antics you have characters do or am amazed at the incredibly interesting solutions you have some of your characters come up with. I would also like to point out how fucking terrifying Chemestro's powerset is. He doesn't need to have Prawns drop their brains from their bodies, he can just make them all have strokes as the blood vessels lose their ability to transport blood effectively. He doesn't need to drop Perry from his suit, he can adjust he permeability of Perry's flesh and the armor of the suit to lock him in place as his skin becomes fused with the metal surrounding him. That would be a terrifying way to kill someone, trap them within their armor/a wall where their skin/flesh has become enmeshed with this other material. Or even simpler, he can just fuck with someone's nervous systems myelin sheathing so that their nerves fire but nothing happens. Why bother binding someone's limbs when you can just make them a temporary paraplegic or quadriplegic? I would like to see some backstory on him developing these powers and turning into the flawed individual he is now. I think it would work well to serve as a foil for Perry. Perry came from a wholesome(ish) family that had two loving parents trying to take care of him, even if they both cause problems, and one of the issues he's dealing with now is his powers turning him into a potential psychopath. Whereas Chemestro had no loving family and is trying to come to terms with the trauma of being raised by a fuckin brain in a jar villain who only saw him as a tool. Would be cool to see the two positions juxteposed against each other and then have some sort of incident that is a defining moment between the two that either reinforces their paths; where Perry turns into more of a psychopath to escape the pain of losing a friend/parent/trauma source point, and Chemestro realizes that he has to confront his issues and move past his petty mindset or he just shoves it down further. I watch a lot of 'Hello Future Me's videos and he does a fantastic job walking through writing topics, and I think both these characters have a really good chance to provide some deep perspectives into how people handle things in their lives. A lot of who we are now is influenced by who we were when we were teens. Some people advance beyond that stage, but most of adult life has a whole lot rhyming with how Highschool was. Regardless of the path you take I think it'll be interesting and I look forward to reading it.

Thomas

While not going a skeeve with Hardcase's new mental illness is good, the fact that she has already recognized it is the first step in managing it, or even overcoming it. It can be used as a vehicle to introduce humorous moments and character growth along with a way to delve deeper into Hardcase's back story. A character without flaws is boring, no one likes a Mary Sue. It is how a character deals with their flows and grows beyond them that make the story good. While Hardcase's new flaws could lead to potential issues the fact that she recognizes it happening should be enough to begin the process of adapting. Abusing a person's mental illness to get something from them is one of the most villainous things that can be done. It is also one of the most common ways of manipulating individuals or groups.

iloverugs

Have to say, Solaris just leaving a base like this where a Tinker went Cthulhu mad to be discovered later seems like a shortsighted move. If it wasn’t, maybe this wasn’t that big of a deal to him compared to other things he’s seen. Also, more of a nitpick on editing, on the scene transition from Solaris to the present, I was confused about who the three people were responding to Jetset’s question about who the professor was. It was obvious it was Wraith later, but it might help just having her say something or do something to show she’s present during the scene’s start.

Jeff Wells

I imagine Solaris left the lair alone because he's invested in perpetuating the system they have. At that stage in his career there's no way he needs the couple million he'd get in salvage, and he actually wants some plucky young tinker to find the lair, strip it for parts, and gain some inspiration and a little bit of cash for the effort. Solaris is all about keeping their system running smoothly, and that should include leaving gems like a tinker's lair lying around for others to find.

Joshua Flowers

I think what OP is referring to, is that the research and materials left behind by the Tinker could infect anyone who finds it. But it could also be spun up as Solaris deciding that anybody who finds the info and decides to view it anyway as some sort of Darwinistic approach to raising future supers. This still seems in line with his character, I believe.

BubblyGhost

The fuck are you on about? Also I dont see anything fetishizing mental illness here, just because something is unpleasant doesn't mean it doesn't exist and that you can't represent it in a story.

Nobody

It doesn't seem to be on a mental illness level yet (as of this chapter, I'm still catching up). More like anxiety with a not so usual outlet...

Eliezer

Solaris was not himself thinking clearly (I infer)

Kemizle

Shouldn’t paradox build his tech for his lair so there won’t be any back door to take advantage of…he should probably extet LLC to control the whole lair so there won’t be any weak points to break in