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This chapter turned out to be an absolute monster size-wise, approaching nearly 10k words. Hence the reason it's rather late. But writing such big mega chunks is getting exhausted, and I might actually return to my self-imposed limits lest I burn out(if expanded to ~7k instead of 6k)

That being said, you can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Brynden Rivers

Thanks for the chapter fantastic as always

ND518

Hmm is it wrong that I’m hoping Jon gets dragged into the southern war?

Mand'alor The Resurrector

God what a great chapter. The defeat of the Others finally happened. Jon’s daughter being born. Jon and Benjen talking about the war in the south. God I hope Robb doesn’t die. I need to have Jon and Robb meet at least meet once more. And Jone eventually joining the war when new of Aegon Blackfyre being alive would be great and absolutely peak. Also on a side note we have not seen the Imp in a while and I am betting Tyrion is cooking up a revenge fit for a second verse to the rains of castemere.

Harkin

I want to see Jon going to war in the south wielding 1 valyrian steel sword, and one other-made ice sword clad in ice plate over his doublet and chain armor.

Dominic

Common Jon, you deeply regretted in your last life that your oaths kept you from aiding rob and your family, don't make the same mistake again. You'd never forgive yourself....

Diego Vicioso

The old gods must be protected. Southern invaders must not be allowed to pass. I propose Lord Stark and the new king beyond the wall team up.

Addie

I was so happy to see the Others defeated only to be stressed by the end of the chapter because of RENLY! And no one knows about Ned Stark in the East!

Cams797

Just to make sure I have this right, Ned and his ever growing army were turned away from Pentos? And then headed south? If that’s right, then the next stop on the Stark building-fury train should be Myr… and would that not be where a large portion of the Westerosi folk that were stolen by the slavers are now?

Myrdin

Now we know how Val’s mother was called. I hope she was Greatjon’s daughter (or was it granddaughter?) that was captured by the wildlings.

Kryn_Womble

Damn, I really wanna see Mace and Renly shit themselves at a Jon gone full Winter Knight in Ice armour and Dark Sister in one-hand and an Ice blade in the other.

Maninthefoxmask

I think Jon's armor makes some sense, they were in a situation where it was foolish to turn down free armor and it does a great job of symbolizing him dominance over the others. Great chapter!