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So, upon some feedback, I decided to cut down on my sweeping PoV style of storytelling. Doubly so that its purpose was fulfilled in establishing all the characters that I wanted to set-up. So from now on, it will be the main one-two PoVs, with the occasional interlude every now and then. Let me know if you like it or not.

It's all in all a long chapter. Could have cut it out a few hours ago and post way earlier, but I wanted to get the school year intro outta the way, and do it with a bang.That being said, you can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the Harry Potter universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne K. Rowling. I do not claim ownership. Edited and beta-read by: Himura; Bub3loka, Ash, and Kingfishlong 1st of September, 1992, Tuesday H...

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Bishop7053

Those two need to hurry up and talk it out. I have such hope that they will do the impossible and fix things by actually talking to each other like reasonable human beings

gigamans

Hopefully the ritual stuff isn't too OP, if he's inferior somehow to a genuine 13 year old it'll be pretty disappointing. I do like the change of there being less POVs, I enjoy reading about Harry and the main plot the most, the stuff with the Malfoy's I was a lot less interested in. Good chapter :)

Dhruv Bhatt

Your writing style is more than fine. Do the style of writing you find to be best suited to how you want your stories to be told.