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A bit of a transitional chapter, but once I started writing, I realised I couldn't just ignore certain build-ups and problems and I have to let the characters interact. I also went back and added a scene in chapter 44, edited all of the previous Juno PoVs in the last 6-7 chapters, because her character felt a bit... vague. Anyway, I'm happy with how the chapter came out, even if it wasn't what was exactly planned.Lemme know what you think in the comments below.Also, you can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the Harry Potter universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne K. Rowling. I do not claim ownership. Edited and beta-read by Himura, Bub3loka, Ash, and Kingfishlong Beginning of June 1993 Harry Pot...

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Ryan

I kinda love the Dumbledore you are writing here - great chapter.

LT Butterfly287

I think this is a pretty good Dumdeldore, but I feel like you waste him on this Harry. This Harry seems to think the world owes him everything, and Dumbeldore especially owes him. So many of their problems stem from Harry refusing to even sit at a table with the man, and I think it stems more from you treating Harry like he's a grown man in a child's body, which he is in a way you could argue he is, but he lacks the ability to understand anyone else's perspective.

Patrick Perrault

Good chapter. Not exciting, but not every chapter can be. Looking forward to the next one.

Garri Sarkisov

Well at least Harry realized Juno is pretty.

Rhett Sellers

So, in rereading, I have a small continuity question. Harry mentions he had visions of Voldemort in Albania. Is this his knowledge from his past, or is he actually having visions? I had thought the visions were explicitly tied to the sliver of Voldemort's soul in his scar, which is no longer present.