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Chapter 6 of No Joy in Command is out for Squires! (Patreon)

Published:
2025-02-10 04:03:43
Edited:
2025-02-20 00:39:08
Imported:
2026-06
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EDIT: I don't know why Patreon has decided to needlessly play around with the previous working embed links, but I suppose I have to link things directly. Chapter link here.Things happen in this chapter(things that aren't fishing, I mean). Sleepy af. My editors are awol, and chapter is mighty unedited (raw enough that it's still twitching, as Gordon Ramsay would say). Things happen.You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the ASOIAF universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of GRRM; I make no claim to ownership. Edited by: Bub3loka Year 129 After Aegon's Conquest Jon Snow The sun was dotted by a veil of torn-up clouds as i...

Comments

Harkin

This new way of posting is very hard to read on my phone. Would it be possible to link to it or just post the text in the chapter?

Nicholas Fiend
>>164186666

If you’re on your iPhone, opening it in the browser and turning on reader mode makes it a very comfortable read.

gladiusx
>>164187981

Apologies. I did the same thing I as I always do, post it in the link format, but it seems Patreon has decided to switch up their embedding. Dropped a link in the description. Let me know if it works.

gladiusx
>>164186666

Thanks for letting me know. Unfortunately, this new way of posting seems to be something Patreon has implemented, since I did not do anything new. Posted a direct hyperlink in the post description. Let me know if it works.

Kryn_Womble

As someone who reads on their phone, if you do decide to implement another method of chapter display, could you keep the current method and do another method as an addition rather than an outright replacement, please?

thevolunteer

Excellent chapter, I really am loving this story so far, and your characterization of Jon. Now all I need is for it to update 3 times a week 🙃

Bukhari

ehh, it appear like an embedded window in the browser, and difficult to read.

Cristi R

You avoided the Valyrian steel sword reveal, warging is such a huge advantage that is underutilised in the books/show. An omake must be written going something like this : - Are you going to pay for that goat? Daemon is struck speechless for a few seconds, he was not expecting this. - I know you saved my daughters and while I admit that is a great debt, you better watch your tongue or I will take Dark Sister and cut it. - You are welcomed to try, but it might not end all that well for you, said Jon really irritated. - Do you imagine a tourney sword can last more than a few hits against Valyrian steel ? - Who said anything about using that. I do have a Valyrian steel blade as well. For the second time in minutes Daemon was speechless, but his ego quickly found a reply : - Unless you are blind I do have a dragon. Vermithor lands and smacks Caraxes with his tail. - I have a bigger one ;)

Grimgoth
>>164186666

For Android (don't know if it's available for Apple) there's the app ReadEra, perfect for eBooks etc. and also works well with this format.

Maurogatos

Good chapter but it felt a little small, maybe cause the pace is slow I don’t know! I hope Jon stop being so miserable… let’s say yea the world gonna be destroyed what ever he do can not change that , but that is no reason to live in so much misery … I don’t expect him to wanna be lord or fall in love in a second but the way he thinks nothing matters anymore ….don’t sit very well with me !

khalid musadak

At the rate this is going we will have a story as long as the others. Love it

MehOhWell

This could have been triple the length and I still would have craved more. Also, it was incredibly cruel to leave us on this cliffhanger, hats off to you sir/madam. I await next week with great anticipation.

זאב ברנזון

The story is great and I don't want to be seen pushing you down but I'm missing some elements This Jon snow feels like Alister Thorne Bitter edgelord John should be a beacon of defiance and hope against the dying light He feels too powerful yet too hopeless

Ambrose Young
>>164211407

Nah Jon feels like a man who has suffered the ravages of war with no respite and almost no hope. Herr he has no real responsibilities and he thinks the world will end in 2 centuries anyway so why not enjoy the simple life?

זאב ברנזון
>>164211407

For me John represents the undying Will of man to make the world a better place even if you make mistakes and you don't know what you're doing you don't stop trying to make the world a better place This devil may care attitude is odd for John

Eric Lachance

Thanks for providing us the link like usual. Jon sure owned these knights. Hopefully he's overestimating the trouble he's in.

Dark-Palace

Is mushroom going to be in this? I’ll find it funny if Jon just sees mushroom and reminds of Tyrion

gladiusx
>>164211407

This is book! Jon, though. He's a flawed hero not some stubborn idealistic man who would always make the 'right' choice to his own detriment like he was in the show, and is currently spiraling down doomerism after witnessing the world end. Don't worry, it won't be for too long. I also thought it prudent to have some character development for Jon, instead of having him enter the scene as a finalised persona.

Bishop7053

He better give him shit and ask for payment for the goat