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Oh look, the plot is thickening. My head has sorta grown numb from writing, and I'm not entirely happy(or unhappy) with the chapter, so I'll probably go back to it later as I usually do(the problems in the previous chapters should be fixed now). Anyway, lemme know what you think in the comments below.You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the Harry Potter universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne K. Rowling. I do not claim ownership. Edited and beta-read by Himura, Bub3loka, Ash, and Kingfishlong. 31st of October 1993, Sunday (8 ...

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Lucion

It's been sometimes since I came across the word 'thot' and that made me giggle for a whole half a minute 😆 Nice chapter btw.

Alkole

Juno here tryna steal both of Harry's pets.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Werewolves in the forest???

Rival

I think there might be an issue with the upload? I was unable to mouse-scroll down and had to use the page down button on keyboard, I checked other docs using the breakers take rewrite upload and was able to mouse-scroll without issues.

Hunter Hardin

Werewolves attacking Hogwarts seem ill-advised, unless certain students are working as their inside men. It’s naturally fortified (it’s a castle) and has wards. Dumbledore, Bones, and a host of deadly professors are currently there, and it’s their home turf. And if things get dangerous enough, you have dozens of older students that are near full fledged wizards and witches that can fight back. So this has to be an attack on Hogsmeade, right? They plan to hit it hard, fast, and then flee before reinforcements arrive? Only issue is that I don’t really see what this gets them. I know they specifically targeted Bones in canon, but that can’t be their objective here. She isn’t in the same position as she was in canon, and even if they did lure her out, that would require attacking long enough for Hogwarts to send reinforcements, which would result in a ton of lost werewolves, and no guarantee that they would even get their target. Not to mention they’d need another attack somewhere else to distract the auror force or reinforcements will come from there as well. Seems like a lot of risk for little reward. Unless their goal is something I’m not thinking of? Capturing a student maybe? Not sure how they’d pull that off.

Archimedes

So if Harry has an affinity for fire magic in this AU, how outlandish would it be for him to use Protégo Diabolica in his later hogwarts years? Definitely my favorite spell from the franchise, and I've yet to see anyone really use it. Every fic author I've come across just defaults to fiendfyre.

Rhett Sellers

The question is what are lupin's allegiances? I think it unlikely he is siding with greyback, but we know no details about his history for the last decade aside from his lapse and his family. The werewolf coincidences keep piling up, and I dont believe in that many coincidences.