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I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter at all (and it's not because I feel sleepy as heck). It's a transitional chapter, most of it written on the fly. I planned the previous parts of year three and the following ones, and this one is supposed to glue them together. Anyway, let me know what you think. You can read the previous chapters in the collection.

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the Harry Potter universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne K. Rowling. I do not claim ownership. Edited and beta-read by Himura, Bub3loka, Ash, and Kingfishlong. 1st of November 1993, Saturday (...

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Lucion

Great! Serious action inbound. Though I doubt the teenage drama is going to last long, given who the 2 are. But there's always Draco's love life to get amusement from😄

TypistTyphon

Love the chapter, good build. Contract for adulthood signed is my vote

Hunter Hardin

Poor werewolves. Imagine having to attack Hogwarts while it’s defended by a Dumbledore driven half mad by the Deathstick.

Patrick Perrault

Good setup. Looking forward to the juicy bits.

Rhett Sellers

I sure hope I am way overly suspicious. Remus returns to Britain when werewolf packs do, Selene returns when Greyback does (and has a scar that might come from a bite), and the poor child is staying with Grandpa? Either I'm right on the money or betrayals in fiction have made me a paranoid reader. But hey, if the author is really out to get me with a plot twist, am I still paranoid? 😉

natio

I don't know why you are unhappy with this chapter. I'm more interested in how Juno is developing as a person than all the pew pew magic spells chapters. Also, we keep getting told how much more dangerous Harry is, with even Dumbledore respecting his progress but we don't have an understanding of WHY his progress is impressive. How much earlier is his journey into elemental magic in comparison to Amelia, Dumbledore or Riddle? While normally the ages of 11 to 17 are the biggest period of growth for a child's magical development do adults still see progress?

The Human

Wasn't moony supposed to be sober?

stephen lyman

Juno needs to talk to Andromeda lol