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Chapter 02 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires! (Patreon)

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2025-07-07 21:27:27
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2026-06
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A very... late chapter. But it's here. Probably not what most of you expected. On a side note, the prologue has been edited, smoothened out, and is now a good 700-800 words larger, and should read better. Writing Rhaella is hard to pin.Anyway, this is probably the last Harrenhal chapter, and next we'll move to KL. Do let me know what you think in the comments.

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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the ASOIAF universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of GRRM; I make no claim to ownership. Edited by: Bubl3oka ??? The Betrayed Lord Commander Longclaw stabbed at the ice, aiming for the chest of the Col...

Comments

Cinema Man

I was right free kills my dumbass after only reading the first sentences 😂😂😂

Archimedes

Great chapter! One question though, is this still a Jon/Rhaella pairing?

Brewt

Thanks for the chapter. I'm curious about how you'll write Aegon, certainly it's an interesting time to set the story with everything in the background going on as far as the attempted reforms ect.

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and it seems like Jon is still killing White Walkers, which is excellent. I am curious if what Rhaella gave him will help. Let's see if Rhaella will be able to change fate. I enjoy how the Old Gods having that sense of unknown power asleep was great. I'm eager to see what happens next.

stevem1

Cool chapter. Rhaella is doing the best she can for her age. Her idea to get Aerys caught with a highborn lady is actually a decent plan. Aegon V wouldn’t want the scandal. He seems terrified of offending nobles. I have to say the Targs have collectively lost their minds. Aegon needs an incestous marriage for dragons? What dragons? He’s going senile. He’d be better off marrying Rhaella to a Tyrelll, Tully, Arryn or Stark. Ditto Aerys. The queen being an obvious exception, she still seems to have her wits, but she’s a Blackwood. Still, even she isn’t fighting the sibling marriage despite her daughter’s doubts. Aerys is surprisingly decent. Though possibly beating the maid an obvious clue that will not hold. Jon’s scene raises more questions than answers. Thanks for the chapter .

Maurogatos

Who is the main character of this story ?? Rhaella or Jon ? Are we following the story of rhaella and how Jon come to her life or the other way around?

Patrick Perrault

The crack was fun, but I missed your more serious storytelling. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.

Grateful Bread

Amazing chapter! Are we going to see canon go off the rails soon?

AJ

"The steward's daughter was struck for implicating the princess." I'm not sure that "implicating" makes sense here, depending on what you meant.