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Chapter 19 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires! (Patreon)

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2025-11-11 09:25:23
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2026-06
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Not a particularly long chapter, but you can consider this another major tuirning point. Let me know what you think in the comments below.WebsiteGoogle Docs.Leaks are getting faster, but I'll keep scrubbing the Google Docs link when it happens.

Comments

avog16

And suddenly rhaella is the heir

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and it seems things have entirely changed. I have to say the plot has thickened, and I am curious who all these new players are. I can say dark things have begun to move, and let's see if the Old Gods won't be able to help somehow. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see the fallout of everything.

Maurogatos

Do I like the story? Probably yes But… I don’t know something fill off! Is it all the new players and mysteries? Is it when is rhaella pov I find my self wanna skip it ? I don’t really know ! Maybe the plot moving to slow for my taste Maybe I’m just eager to read more about Jon Cause I don’t care about rhaella She has bigger part in the story and maybe I get it you must build your world and I just hope this gonna change and Jon take a more central role in the story ! Anyways !

Cristi R

I doubt that. The king went to his tent to take a shit. We could have returned to the royal box or not. If Genna is with child then he or she is the heir. Furthermore this is not an 'explosion' per se, so quite a few people will survive it, even if some will have some gruesome wounds (wildfire burns are not pretty). What I want to know is who's Daeron. I highly doubt he's the first born of Maekar, but I doubt Gladiusx added him to the cast without reason.

Mandragoran

Hot damn what a cliffhanger! I’m loving the story and the world building man. While I loved NJiC (it’s one of, if not my favorite fic of all time), I think there could have been more substance to it. This is looking like it could be number one for me

gladiusx

Pretty spot on. And Daeron is an important OC.

avog16

Yeah Aegon was in the loo, but he's the king not the heir. And as for Genna, the kingdom is really too unstable to make an unborn child or infant heir. I see him making Rhaella heir, at least until the baby is born and reached 5 or 6 at least. About the wildfire, if I remember right from canon wildfire doesn't go out unless its buried in sand, so even if they survived, they'll still burn.