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Chapter 24 of Broken Dreams is out! (Patreon)

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2025-12-25 21:52:59
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2026-06
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Anyway, I'm back on track. It's a bit of an interlude chapter, but not one I wanted to skip. Without further ado:WebsiteGoogle DocsGoogle docs will be scrubbed upon leak as usual.

Comments

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and it looks like Jon has finally reached King's Land. I have to say I like the duel with the archers, and I can't wait for Jon to reach mastery level with four arrows. I am curious about the rise of bloodlust, though I wonder if there is more to it. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Merry Christmas.

1999

A beautiful chapter, but the pacing is slow compared to the other stories I've read from you. I hope you'll develop more details about Jon being touched by the Heart of Winter. For example, are ordinary weapons no longer effective against his skin? I don't recall Jon ever trying this; the only time I remember him being injured was by dragon glass. There are five baby dragons; Jon might have dragon blood, but after what happened to him, is it possible that the dragons will distance themselves from him or not want to bond with him? You could even bring up the idea of ​​ice dragons; there are already rumors and sailors' tales about them in the The Shivering Sea. In the lore .

peterodatilo

Can't wait for a faster pace once jon is in kingslanding.

Abhishek Kumar

maybe going to website version is reducing the comments, hopefully not the viewership.

gladiusx

First, Jon isn't immune to steel. The Others wore crystalline armour in the books; he doesn't have that. Second, more of his powers will be explored as the story progresses, and I planned it out to be in conjunction with the plot.

MaximaRegina

Loved the archery contest! Haven’t read a duel settled that way before (most authors tend to go for the sword fights), so this was really interesting! Also cannot wait to see what happens in KL and if Jon can bond with a dragon or not. Would assume so since he shows up as a dragon in Rhaella’s dreamscape, but I find it difficult to predict your stories (thank you!!) and am looking forward to whatever way this story goes.