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Chapter 23 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires! (Patreon)

Published:
2025-12-15 17:16:03
Edited:
2025-12-15 17:38:53
Imported:
2026-06
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That chapter fought me hard. Anyway, not as long as I wished, not exactly happy, and I'll probably go back to it. Anyway, without further ado:WebsiteGoogle DocsGoogle Docs will be scrubbed on leak.

Comments

AceofValyria

This build up to the kings landing scenes are killing me! can’t wait!

Maurogatos

Hmm google docs not working ?

Easlye

Sort and sweet. Looking forward to the next one.

suspicious

Mhm, the chapter is good, maybe a bit rougher around the edges atm. I think the first part was excellent. However, I can't stop feeling that this passage from Jon grows more tedious by the minute. Would've probably enjoyed it more as snippets and flashbacks in conversation in Kings Landing. I think the problem is knowing that KL is the destination bc of Rhaella and everything else, so Jon's part feels like filler in comparison. All the more when Rhaella's having Dragons and court intrigue while he's hackin' at some common (knightly) brigands. Wishin' the best and tftc!

Mandragoran

I can’t remember, did a Darry die in the wildfire? That could be the motivation behind their “tolls”. It’d be bad for the Targaryens to lose their most leal house in the riverlands

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and I am curious about our wandering priest. I feel like there is more to the man than he's letting on. I can't wait to see how Jon handles the Darry men. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Yeet

Where is the chapter?