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A bit late, and I had to once again draft a different editor. Anyway, the chapter didn't come exactly as I'd liked, but I'm still happy with it. Without further ado:WebsiteGoogle Docs

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HP81

Bruh…

Alkole

Fuckkkkkkk dumbledores death is gonna turn this into an all out war cause no one else can stand up to voldemort currently

Alkole

Quite literally all of Harry's plans go to the drain now but maybe he will at least get control of the elder wand cause I dont think Voldemort knows about the hallows at this point in tjme

gigamans

Voldemort defeated Dumbledore, so by the canon logic the wand is his until someone defeats him. It's more likely that "Dumbledore's" wand will be buried with him, and Harry will leave it there or move it to some other more secure location, or snap it like in canon (movies). Either way the wand shouldn't work for Harry and that's probably for the best? It's kind of an asspull powerup in a lot of stories, the whispering from the wand ultimately didn't do anything but get Dumbledore to get off his ass, so it was for the boys in the end.

Lesion

I always knew Dumbledore would die but I still wasn’t ready for that trap lol. Sad to see Dumbledore go but I can’t wait to see everyone’s reaction to Dumbledore’s death. Voldemort’s pride biting him in the ass at the end was too funny.

natio

In this chapter Harry says he wants to start teaching them the patronus charm but in chapter 71, after the training everyone stays to offer to help harry and juno with the dementors, hannah even saying we've all mastered the charm.

gladiusx

Been a while, I'll see how to edit the inconsistency. Will be addressed by tomorrow.

Josh Watson

I was going to say this, I wonder if maybe it could just be changed to teaching them how to send messages with the Patronus? (Though, that kinda implies a further plot point. So idk.)

natio

I had been thinking something similar because I'm afraid Gladius is still suffering burnout and I'm sorry I mentioned anything. I wanted to offer the following: "As you have all become proficient in the Patronus charm, I want to teach you a way you can use it to send messages." Harry summons Patronus, it appears, he gives it a message and it travels to Dobby at the mansion. Dobby pops in to say hello and repeats the message then pops back home. "There is even a way to improve your control by casting the spell without having your Patronus manifest next to you" Harry casts the spell but it shoots out as a ball of light and Harry tells those assembled the message is 'purple pumpkin people eater' Dobby pops back and conveys the message.

gladiusx

It's fine, took me a while as I was stuck on a PoV on BD. Both 71 and 76 are edited. The intiial Patronus practice was just to get them to a stable shield (low effort), and now the lesson continues on the old practice.