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The first PoV fought me for a full four days and then some. I think I'll keep my PoV as tight as possible from now on, trying to avoid adding anyone new unless I really can't help it.

Anyway, without further ado:Website:Google Docs

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FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and it seems like Jon just showed his skills in a duel and made a statement. I did like how Aerys is actually thinking and starting to plan now. I do like how Geena supported Aerys, though, helping him get out of his own head. I am curious if Aerys will visit his sister, though. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Lesion

Great to see Branda and Aerys’ pov this time. Glad to see that Aerys’ and Genna’s relationship is still strong even with all the obstacles that happened in the beginning and with the Green Tourney. Looking forward to how the KL arc will end, knowing you it’s prolly gonna be a wild plot twist haha. Looking forward to your short story coming out in the future. Out of curiosity do you know how much is left in the story? It feels like we’re either at the halfway point or almost there

Easlye

It doesn't read like you struggled with the Branda POV. Great work.

Pymresurge

I really enjoyed the duel, and you did a great job with the Branda POV. You have no idea how excited updates to this story make me, looking forward to more!