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A quite intense chapter. Longer than I expected. I'm not entirely happy with some parts of the flow, and I might go back to revisit (seeing as I chose to tell it all in a single uninterrupted PoV). Anyway, without further ado:WebsiteDocs

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Lesion

It’s amazing to see all of the plot points and ideas that you had planned throughout the story come to fruition. Especially with the lack of details on characters or history during this era of ASOIF. It’s satisfying to read this story because it feels like I’m reading the actual books. Great way to Whitedream’s arc and to see Rhaella return back to her true self. I wonder if Rhaella will be willing to train under Jon now after seeing his abilities and because of what happened with Whitedream. Can’t wait to find out why Gerold was glowing, I’m assuming it was either because of the new gods or he unlocked a special power. Rip to Tom and Fletcher, wished they could have stayed alive longer but it wouldn’t be a asoiaf if characters didn’t die.

FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and Jon used the Others' power. I am very curious to see what the price will be once he heals—great job, and what a way to finish an arc. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Yeno Memevig

Peak. The last of the Gardeners dead by dragon fire. It's like poetry. Tyftc

gladiusx

Nah, I'll try to get it out in the next 3 days or so.