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A bit on the shorter side, though I'm happy with how it turned out. Chapters 34, 40, and 42 have been edited to read more smoothly, and some of Rhaella's interactions have been properly polished.Anyway, without further ado:WebsiteGoogle Docs

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FallenMetalGod

Thank you, and I am not even surprised that it's from the Gardener Line. I was almost thinking it was Garth Greenhand himself. Let's hope Jon pulls some Stark and Targaryen magic out to save her, or some Night King abilities. It's interesting to see Rhaella traveling through the ages and how her ancestors saw her, though. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Cinema Man

Greenhand? dude your thought process is WILD....

Lotus92

I knew something was weird about Whitehand but it is interesting to see how his plan actually changed from the start of the series to now cuz of the early return of magic. That was well done since it kind of masked a bit how weird he was later compared to early on. I find it kind of fitting for asoiaf that to wake her up from the enslavement she got woken up by her slaver ancestors. George would approve of that.

Lesion

Great chapter. I’ve been looking forward to seeing Rhaella’s pov and it paid off. The valyrian mages interacting with Rhaella was my favorite part of the chapter. I can’t wait to see Whitedream’s reaction to Jon getting through the barrier because of Bloodraven lmao.

Mandragoran

Great chapter. I absolutely love how clearly planned out you have this story. Makes it all coming together so satisfying!

Lord Sturm

Night King is just TV shit to avoid advanced plot. It's more like limited conceptual control over cryokinesis.