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Her man had it all. Their new roommate had MORE.

The west coast trip has begun — and with a new ring on her finger, Shannon’s surrender deepens… not just in body, but in identity.

Craig watches her transformation unfold with awe, ache, and something darker. He’s being pulled further in, unraveling by the day. But when a new woman enters their orbit, one who sees everything, it raises a question Craig isn’t ready to face:

Can she pull him back from the edge of what he’s becoming…Or will she push him over it?

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Eric

Holy shit! I need to take a break...

BentForBlack

That fantasy should've been real. The only thing hotter than a white girlfriend making her white boy submit to a bigger better Black man is him submitting to several Black men. Crawling to Ron, kneeling for him, hands behind his back with Ron's hands gripping his hair, using his mouth to thank Ron for pleasing his needy greedy girlfriend... Shannon threatening Craig with the plug and what that meant? That was so fucking hot. I'm going to return to that fantasy more than once.

BentForBlack

Craig's fantasy was incredible. Imagine getting to crawl to a Black man on your knees, putting your hands behind your back and having him grab your hair and force you to serve him while on your knees. I love Black men. And all at the command of your confident, kinky, size queen girlfriend, while she touches herself while watching you struggle to wrap your greedy eager white lips around her Black Bull's superior Black meat, your own pink penis painfully hard and embarrassingly inadequate compared to his own. And then she pushes a plug between your cheeks? Who wouldn't lose their minds with lust at that scenario, gay curious or even straight? I hope Shannon finds a kindred spirit in Amber, that Amber quickly learns that Craig is unfortunately not worthy of her, that she - like Shannon - deserves more, deserves Black, and rejects Craig. That despite there being two women and two men, Craig ends up kneeling for the other man because race wins out over gender. (I'm a bit of a perv that way.) And I want to see how Kacey writes Shannon reacting to Craig's submission, to learning about Craig's oral and even anal fantasies about BBC. And how Amber, new to their games, reacts when she sees Craig pale in comparison to Ron, when she sees what a submissive and eager servant Craig is when Shannon or Ron command it. (Ron hasn't commanded Craig much so far. Here's hoping that changes in a big way.)

RA

I think I agree with most when I say the recent stories including bi-curiosity themes are incredibly erotic and some of your best work 🥵

Eric

I went to sleep, woke up and revisited parts of the newest chapter and it was hotter the 2nd time around. Sweet fucking christ. I'm not gay, I'd never be interested in watching a white guy submit to Black men sexually, but reading about it is undeniably interesting. I love the power dynamic, the subversive kink of it. I like Shannon's sexual confidence growing to the point where she's commanding Craig to do what she wants and I like that he's obedient. I really enjoy celebrating Black men and elevating them above white boyfriends, I enjoy playing into all the stereotypical racial dynamics of Black men being bigger and better for reasons I'll never understand, so the white boyfriend submitting seems a natural extension of that, in addition to being wonderfully kinky and depraved in a way that excites me despite not being into male/male stories. "Race wins out over gender" that's an interesting dynamic, and the dominant man being Black somehow makes the idea of the male POV character submitting to another man much more palatable, for sure. I kinda hoped Amber was gonna be Black; that would've made for an interesting dynamic. I agree it'd be fun if Ron took a more active role in commanding Craig to serve him. I'm curious to see how that would unfold, I think it'd be fun to see Ron take charge more than he already has, for Craig to start being conditioned to look to Ron for guidance in the bedroom. I'm curious to see how Kacey would write that, how she would have Craig dealing with his non-sexual sense of self warring with his growing understanding of who his sexual self is, how he's not at all who he thought he was, how he not only enjoys being outshined and pushed aside by a cocky Black man, but that he is willing to serve the Black man just as his girlfriend is. (Not just willing, but eager to: he fantasized about it!) She's already doing that, of course. I'm enjoying what she's doing with the "this is not who I am" dazed, confused denial by Craig... and how Shannon isn't pushing but more gently nudging against that because she know him better than he knows himself. (Although the best part of that was in his fantasies.) I want to see Ron commanding Craig to serve him so that we can get explicit consent, as much as anything; we need Ron telling Craig what to do so that we know Ron is okay with what's going on. Obviously he'd speak up if he wasn't, but it's still nice to have that verbal confirmation. (Plus I'm interested to see Craig react to a "good boy" from Ron instead of Shannon. Getting it from both sides...) I'd be curious to see a chapter written from Shannon's point of view where the prominent sexual act is Craig kneeling before Ron, being properly respectful towards him, while Ron degrades Craig in kinky, nasty, dirty ways so that we can see this from Shannon's POV; I'd love to know what she's thinking as she watches Craig submit, I think that would be interesting to see how Shannon's view of her white boyfriend evolves as she sees him subservient before the better Black man, to see how her idea of their relationship, their sexual dynamic, evolves as she sees Ron taking charge. (I'm not into the idea of a white guy sexually degraded by a Black man, obviously, but I'm curious to see how Kacey would write that; I'd love to read that scene to see how dirty and kinky and depraved Kacey could get. So... I'd like to see that scene *if Kacey was passionate about it enough to write it.* Because I'd love to see how a woman would see that scenario unfold, I like the idea of Kacey establishing the sexual hierarchy in that way. Again, it's not about the act, it's about establishing interesting and subversive power dynamics.)

Eric

I can't believe how hot Craig's submission was. Shannon teasing him, egging him on, commanding him to thank the bigger and better Black man “Now go thank the man who gives me everything I need. Who fucks me the best.” Jesus. She plugged him! Jesus, what a woman. (And the foreplay... Every inch closer was a betrayal — not just of pride, but identity. Of history. Of manhood. He crawled. Because of course he did. Craig reached the foot of the chair and sat back on his heels, spine rigid, pulse pounding in his ears. His hands trembled slightly as they rested on his thighs. He looked up slowly, his gaze rising over Ron’s chest, the bulk of his torso, the line of his jaw — and finally, to that cock. “Put your hands behind your back.” He obeyed. Automatically. Arms slid behind him, shoulders pulled back, fingers folding against the small of his spine like a penitent disciple. He sat taller now, chest exposed, vulnerable. His breath was uneven. His mouth slightly open. “Now start with your mouth.” I need a woman that confident, that commanding. Jesus.)

Eric

Sorry, I just... reading the newest 2 chapters, seeing Shannon's characterization, especially in Craig's fantasy, how she threatened to plug him! Makes me wish "Femdom" had performed a hell of a lot better in that poll. The entire Shannon and Craig dynamic (as well as Joy and Craig, as well as Sophie and Charles...) plus how Kacey keeps mentioning that the women are barefoot, makes me really eager and excited at the thought of her writing a Femdom story. It's one of my favorite dynamics in the BBC/interracial erotica category, the way the woman gets to explore both sides of her sexuality: slutty submissive for a strong, hung Black man who *stretches* her like she's never been before but then confident, commanding Domme to her white boyfriend who obeys her orders, serves her (and potentially her Black Bull, of course), and devotes himself to her in the bedroom... unable to resist, overwhelmed by her sexuality, subservient either because of her confidence or the Black man's superior sexuality/masculinity or, optimally, both.

Kacey Loveington

Thank you all for the positive comments...I had a lot of fun writing these two chapters💦

Mikasa

I became too depressed to read this. Is it just me, or do each female character of Kacey's become cruel after they meet a black man? Initially, I liked Shannon, but as the story progressed, she became much less likable. I liked the story and writings, no questions regarding that. But the way she corrupted, looks like it hurt me.

Kacey Loveington

Hi Mikasa, I’m sorry if this hurt you whilst reading it. It’s never my intention. There is a fine line between cruelty and teasing, between real and role-play. For me, Shannon is pushing boundaries. She sees Craig’s struggles, but also his arousal. Even when she toys with him, she sees it effect him not just emotionally but his arousal. It’s experimental between them. And that will continue in 10/11. Again, sorry if you are emotionally hurt reading these types of stories. But just to notify you, there will be others like this going forward. If you want to discuss a refund. Send me a private message xx

Mikasa

No, I like the writings to be honest. I find the female character's arc to be a little disburbing. Shannon used to love Craig, and while he is not enough, she made him go through some of the things where the lines between love and torture become too blurry. She might still have feelings for him, but it appears she is taking advantage. Again, sorry for the comment. It's just that I love it when the characters are evolving, but they still have feelings for each other, just as they did before that apartment meeting.

Kacey Loveington

Thank you for the compliment on the writing. I am happy to receive feedback so don't worry about your comment. But I write what I write, and I likely won't be making significant changes to that. Each story of course will be different, there will be some I am sure that will be more to your tastes...But my worry is, if you genuinely feel affected by reading my stories then that's not a healthy thing for you, because you won't likely find many happy endings for the original couples here. There is a lot of cheating, there will be cuckolding and there will be humiliation at times. Even at times when I aim to write a story like Room For More? With the intention of a loving relationship evolving but remaining loving, and sharing, it can deviate as I write it. And I still maintain, even though she has acted in the way she has, Shannon still loves Craig. She is pushing him, finding out what he really wants and likes. Sure it's for her own benefit also. But Craig isn't a weak man, he's just a curious and confused man, she isn't forcing him to do anything, she is giving him options to explore.

Mikasa

thank you for being so gracious. It's just that I love to like the characters, and when they deviate from that, it sometimes hurts. I hope to see a more humane side of Shannon in the following chapters, and also a good fight from Craig. Losing one's masculinity is a big deal, and I want to see Ron play a more dominant role in shaping Craig's decision. His aura is unmatched, and that's ok. However, to submit a guy like Craig, he has to do something he has never done, and has never been challenged like this.

Jimbo

Hi Kaey. loved it. looking forward to see how the dynamic between the 4 of them shifts. I am already imagining a hot tub scene with the 4 of them and Shannon and Amber playing together as Craig practices his oral technique on Ron. Please keep this going as it makes me cum so hard.

Kacey Loveington

Thank you Jimbo...I think the hot tub will definitely be in play in the upcoming chapters ;)

Jimbo

Can't wait :)

Eric

I appreciate how she's pushing him, for his sake as well as her own. Him being curious and confused enables her to take charge and lead him in a really believable and fun way; I appreciate that you don't characterize "submissive" as "weak", they're not that same thing. It makes sense that Craig would struggle with his newfound sexuality, there's nothing wrong with HIM questioning himself and wondering because it's all new to him (especially after his fantasy was much more Black male-centric than I bet he'd've ever suspected it would be) but I hate the implication that being submissive or gay/bi makes a man weak or less of a man. I agree that I want to see Ron take a more active role in dominating Craig; I want to see Shannon reacting to that. For what it's worth, I absolutely LOVE what Kacey is doing with Shannon (and Joy... and I'm optimistic about what Amber will bring to the dynamic). I don't like humiliation but I enjoy teasing (and femdom) a lot; there's grey area between "teasing" and "humiliation" that I think Kacey is navigating wonderfully. Honestly, I could tolerate a harder lean with Shannon... she hasn't pushed that far in "real life", even; the hardest she ever pushed wasn't her, it was Craig's fantasy of her. (Joy pushed further than Shannon did, I thought. And I loved that, I didn't think she went too far.)

Eric

"She is pushing him, finding out what he really wants and likes. Sure it's for her own benefit also. But Craig isn't a weak man, he's just a curious and confused man, she isn't forcing him to do anything, she is giving him options to explore. " This is a large part of why I wanted Craig's fantasy to be "real": if it was real instead of a fantasy than Shannon would be privy to how he reacted to everything. I want her to know how turned on Craig was by everything so she can keep pushing him. (I also find it interesting that he came right when he was fantasizing about Shannon pushing the plug into him. I'm so bummed out that Femdom didn't perform better on the "New Kinks" poll, I hope that doesn't prevent Kacey from sprinkling strong femdom elements in some of her stories, the ones that naturally grow that way... like Room For More, of course. And the eagerly awaited "His Sister's Revenge".)

Mikasa

The way Kacey is pushing her is totally new to me. I was really shocked to see her having a free-flow relationship with Ron, where I thought they should do it together. Instead, I see her miles away in a new direction, compelling Craig in her fantasy. At this point, I thought Ron would demand how they should behave and adapt, and he is having it too easy. So, there's little discomfort on my part. Kacey is doing an excellent job with her writing, and I would love to see where the story goes. The authors I am accustomed to, such as Fifth Estate or Strombringer, often feature black characters who are too dominant, and I think this somehow shifted my view to one side. Although a bit uncomfortable, I wish to see it till the end. And, on Kacey, I'm really starting to get Kacey, and she's becoming one of my favorite writers. And, again, really sorry for my comment. I shouldn't have mentioned how my mental state was after reading this chapter, really sorry.

RA

Agree…makes me wish I was in Craig’s situation 😳🥵

Eric

Craig's situation except for his fantasy having been real. If nothing else (there may be other reasons though), it'd be that much hotter for it to have been real because Shannon would know how much Craig was into that, how she can push him *at least* that far... further, even.

fanfoot

Agree completely. I think there's been a pretty hard left turn over the last month or so, from simple big cock stories to hard cucking with forced bi elements, pregnancy kink, heavy humiliation, pussyless. I assume we'll move on to cages and feminization next, maybe real B&D elements. I had serious trouble even reading the first few pages of this. I doubt I'll read the rest. This was a nice soft cuckold fantasy for a bit but now the wife is just being incredibly cruel. If I were going to write chapter 10 myself Craig would probably commit suicide knowing his wife wouldn't notice or care very much. I'm shocked to say I might be out. Not to say this stuff won't be popular. Look at say RabbleLaid's polls before each story segment--the audience always wants the harshest stuff. Personally I'm not into this and can't follow. Plus I think its boring. Want to know how this story works out? We already know--Shannon will leave Craig, he'll be destroyed, she won't give him a second thought unless its to send him some cruel videos taunting him.

JM

Beautiful addition to the story, Kacey! I'll admit when I read black velvet pouch, my mind immediately went to a chastity cage... Wishful thinking I guess! 😉

DC

I enjoyed the story and the build up , but my problem is Shannon is becoming abusive and Craig doesn't see it or want to see it...I know it's fiction and but that kind of abuse isn't cool, but what Shannon is implanting in Craig's conscious....it feels like I'm reading Jeffrey Dhamer guide "How to Care for your Kittens".

Will F

I expected more of a spine from Craig, more desire to keep the most important person in his life as HIS. Stories in the genre rarely show fight from the white boyfriend/husband. There is simply no way he would not have insisted on some conditions on Shan and Ron’s interactions. That would have been the only way to maintain some level co-equal control over what he was being asked to consent to. Loved the start to this series, but you lost me when each member of this couple took radical turns that seemed so out of character to who they appeared to be. I believe your stories would benefit from your white characters being more assertive in their attempts to protect their relationships, but still ultimately losing out.

Rube

I couldn’t continue to see Craig continue see his wife treat him so cruelly after she begged him to tell Ron to take her. He never expressed to her how he wanted to say no but said yes because she begged and pleaded. Why he doesn’t realize she will never come back to him I don’t get. She told him she would never go back. So to see a man so weak is nauseating! I couldn’t continue to read this because to me the Craig loved and lived to please his wife and she doesn’t feel the same way. He is left to watch and in the end he’s alone. It’s like watching porn. After you cum you are left alone and empty. Hope he wakes up and finds someone who appreciates him in the upcoming chapters.