Searching for the Sky Ch. 21 (Patreon)

Some FemDom in this chapter. Not really my thing but it fit the character so I rolled with it. :D

I was reminded yet again of how lucky I am to have 2muchdiggity as an editor. Normally he sends me back a ready-to-go chapter with some comments on things that need clarification or even continuity issues. Because he was pressed for time he sent me the version with all of the corrections he made still waiting for approval.

Holy... crap.

• I read through the chapter once (I don't count how many little corrections and rewrites I do but first read-through usually takes 2-3 hours, if not more. I've never really timed it.)
• scan it with Grammarly (usually around 70-80 suggested corrections)
• read through the chapter a second time
• send it to oldfart(15-30 suggested corrections)
• third read-through when I get it back from him
• then ship it off to 2muchdiggity

After that you may be wondering: How much could there be left?

About 145 corrections... or you could say 146 because I had a comment about a long-ass, hard to read sentence.

After looking through them, I could have just clicked "Accept All" at the beginning and moved on with my day. There was not a single one that I rejected out of 145...

I said it when he came on board, the man is good.

I was wrong

The man is DAMN good.

On with the Chapter!

Access, Breezy, 2v1 Old Wounds, New Bodies, Old Faces

Enjoy!

-Blu

P.S. 6 pages done on Chapter 22, going to try to get it out before the end of the month.