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Slightly short chapter this time, but with good reason.

I wasn't feeling really comfortable with how the chapter ended and one of my editors made a comment that it felt incomplete. So, I backed things up to finish off at a more natural stopping point. It cut off nearly two pages but is a more solid ending to the chapter. 

In the bright side, those two pages will be going right onto the front of Chapter 23 so you won't be missing out on anything. :D


Found this on the interwebz.

She needs a bigger sword with a scabbard across the back and to lose the elf ears, but the armor is close :)

Removal. Fields of Gold. Perspective. Entering the AO

Enjoy!

-Blu

Comments

MrBlonde29

Trying not to spoil anything here but aaaaarrrrgh cliffhanger!!!

BluDraygn

And I quite literally wasn't trying to do that. This wasn't even the original ending to the chapter 🤣

Adam reads

yeah ... I can see how that would be a natural place to stop, because the next rest stop naturally would be the resolution of where you left it ... so if you were only a couple pages into it, good call!