Last Name Pt 2 is out! (Patreon)

Woot! Made it! 

I want to quickly mention that I do not have some weird fetish for chopping women's legs off. In the original plan for this side story, only Devlin and Naden survived the first encounter, but that felt like too much.

I think the Grammarly upgrade is here to stay. I would still like to get a few more people's opinions on it, but doing my final readthroughs, it just feels... stronger is the word I'm looking for, I think. It does feel like there are a ton more commas, but I have since discovered that most of those were supposed to be there because I use tons and tons of complex sentences (by definition, not that they are really that complex). Personally, I'm okay with this. I've never felt the necessity to dumb-down my writing, and if the price I pay is a few more commas, so be it. 😁

FYI the program normally gives me 60-80 suggestions. The premium version gave me 500+.

Quality is a harsh taskmaster.

Last note because I think I failed to mention this in either of the other two posts. There is a purpose, albeit a fairly small one, in LotGD for introducing everyone to Devlin.

As usual, I think there was a bunch of things I wanted to say, but now I can't remember them... sigh.

So, on with the story!

Enjoy!

-Blu