Last Name Pt. 1 is out! (Patreon)

Not much to say except I upgraded my Grammarly subscription to premium for a month to check it out and from what I've seen today I may need to invest in the yearly option.

 To me it made things feel more natural to my reading voice which has always been a major worry of mine with these things. 

Does it read better? Does it feel choppy now? Let me know what you guys think down in the comments.

I should have part 2 out tomorrow but that really depends on when I get it back from the editors. This Grammarly upgrade took me from spending a couple of hours reviewing oldfart's and 2muchdiggity's changes to spending close to eight hours in this first part alone.

I hope it shows because I feel like I have been put through the wringer today.

Enjoy!

-Blu