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Ehhhhh... kind of ambivalent about this one? I might do 1-2 more of these super short interludes. The idea is to introduce all of these future antagonists from their own perspective. I've never done this... I don't think (how could I know what I've done. you expect me to remember all that?) but I've seen it done. Both well and poorly. I think it fits in a story like this in particular, but... I'm not sure.
Basically, lemme know what you think?

Interlude - A Normal Man

“Coffee?” A pretty young woman asked him as he stepped into the conference room.

“Oh?” he asked. He was, admittedly, a little thirsty, and maybe a little frazzled. His stomach was in knots, but that was always the case before this kind of meeting. He made sure that it didn’t show on his face or expression. Cool. Confidence. He needed to be both. “What kind is it?” he asked.

The secretary smiled kindly, and he was keenly aware that she was pretty. Too pretty. A ranker, then? E, at the very least. “It’s a blend from COMPANY. From a C-rank world. It’s quite tasteful,” she said.

“Ah, well, no thank you. It’s sweet of you to offer,” he said. “Do you have water, perhaps?”

“No coffee, Phil?” Someone at the table asked.

He finally turned to see who was here already. Five of the seven members of the board were seated, though the atmosphere was casual. Three men and two women in suits, all with mugs nearby, all with heavy augmentations of the subtle and futuristic looking sort, and all rich beyond the comprehension of the average person.

“No,” he said. “I’ve been laying off the caffeine.”

It was a lie. One that the others ate up, though. They’d all had their times when they tried to kick a habit or another, and he was able to walk up to the front of the room, a fresh and cool water-bottle in hand, while making small talk and complaining about the nasty headaches he had.

The truth was more complicated. 

He didn’t want to be a ranker.

In fact, he wanted nothing to do with magic. And yet, the more he looked, the more he found. It was everywhere, slowly infecting the world. The people sitting here had all paid their way to E-ranker. The nice young secretary by the entrance was a D-ranker. The number of rankers was rising every single day, and it was significantly outpacing the rate of birth.

And it was a disaster.

Every drink these board members drank today would pass through them. As E-rankers they might absorb between 30-60% of the magical energy in the food. That tiny amount would circulate in their bodies for a while before winking out. It would empower, cure, envigourate. It would make them more.

These people would never be D-rankers. Not with the life they lead. For that, they’d need to face true hardship, or feel something more. 

D-rankers absorbed more magic still, and produced it ex-nihilo as well.

All that excess magic would go down the drain, pissed away. It would collect in the sewers, be pulled into the water supply, and come down as rain. Factories that produced magical items burned some away. Some packaging was trashed. Some magic was lost.

At least the magic from portals was so pure that it didn’t tie itself to anything.

But it didn’t matter. The world was slowly gaming in magic, like microplastics only a million times more disastrous. 

He had to do something. He had to help the world become less vile than it was becoming with each passing day.

More than once, in his career, he’d been encouraged to ascend. To pay the relatively low cost to become an E-ranker, to leave behind normality. Normal people were poor people.

Hasn't that been the truth of humanity since the first man discovered the concept of power and wealth?

He planned on fixing that.

There were two paths ahead of him. Either everyone was rich and powerful, in which case no one was, or the world worked to remove the wealth to begin with. 

The last two members of the board arrived and took their seats. He chatted, smile on, good mood elevated. He remembered names and little details, made small talk and gossipped, slipping in a few jokes. He was charismatic. He knew it, and he’d worked hard to be better at it.

It was work, too. Memorizing names and stories and details wasn’t something that came naturally to him. Perhaps, if he was better, but he’d refused betterness in order to focus on making the world a more fair place.

“Thank you all for coming here,” he said as he addressed the entire room. There was a monitor behind him that came on, linked to an interface on his eyes. That was one thing he didn’t mind so much. Betterment by technological means had a place.

If he had his way, it would be a great place. 

“We’re here today to discuss Project Guardian. We’re nearly seven months from early deployment, and things have gotten quite interesting. I think you’ll find that this, more than any other project our R&D division is working on, might well cement our place in the future.”

***

Comments

João Vene

“It’s a blend from COMPANY. My favorite, BRAND PRODUCT, made by COMPANY

prentice barry

is the coffee made by a company called "company" or is that a note to fill in the name at a later date?

João Vene

The villain being a conservative anti-magic guy is interesting. Does he have a 5D chess plan to restrict portals and magic with the disaster, or does he just fuck up? I'd imagine project guardian is some way to clear portals without rangers, so they don't get the magic boost. A public disaster caused by rangers failing to clear portals and the portals breaking would be great for a project like that, but it might also be that he pushes for the portals to be cleared or defended by project guardian, and it fails spectacularly

HikinBear

A Normal Man with a crusade wrapped as a product. The most dangerous kind of man. I like this format. The Interlude sets up the mysterious Man and his phobia nicely.

PJ Thum

Located in REGION, COUNTRY, they use the freshest TYPE OF BEANS harvested at TIME OF DAY using SECRET TECHNIQUE and brewed using UNIQUE PROPRIETARY TECHNIQUE to create DISTINCTIVE TASTE

Genebeep (LadyLinq)

I really want COMPANY to be the actual name, and for it to be a chain. The guy who originally started it messed up the paperwork and when he realized it made people talk about it, he decided to just keep the name.

HikinBear

It’s On-Brand for this story. Just as the MC and the Normal Man have no name, we have the coffee made by COMPANY.

TeaGeek

I like this interlude with an antagonist introduction, particularly at the end of an arc or book, setting up for the next arc to come. A couple little edits: Everyone already pointed out the placeholder, though I agree it would be hilarious if that was the name of a large brand, similar to First Street for restaurant supply. “It would empower, cure, envigourate.” - not incorrect spelling, really, but envigourate is an obsolete version of modern invigorate “The world was slowly gaming in magic,” - gaining in magic?

Wtcher

Enticing! I can appreciate the mindset... I think I used to play a character with a very similar (albeit taken in the opposite direction -- ergo, EVERYONE should have the option of being magical) mindset in a pen & paper. All for the democratization of society and the diversification of power away from the few.

Skydda Dragontooth

To stop magic you need to stop its source, the portals. And it's to be deployed about a month and a half before the breach. It may be a method to stop portals opening in the first place. This causes the mana to build up either in the area around the device or in the portals themselves. With B-rank portals being the result

Wtcher

It's got the right amount of sarcasm for me. :) There's a brand around here called No Name.

Palmer

A great antagonist. Someone that hopes to make the world more democratic, by centralizing an ungodly amount of wealth to craft the perfect world. Truly detestable.

Inv7ctus

Very juicy for how short it is. Any bets on Project Guardian being an absolute pain in the ass we'll have to deal with later that most certainly contributed to the Breach.

Dopplerdee

I mean that wouldn't stop it, going by what he said, to really stop magic you need to kill every day ranked and above because they make magic on their own that gets spread into the environment.

Skydda Dragontooth

True, but you cannot justify getting rid of the rankers until the problem of portals is solved, as currently they are the only ones who can deal with them. While portals open there will always be more rankers

Osiris

No takers in that bet. It's almost guaranteed, unless Raven is muddying the waters on purpose.

Wiggy

Huh. So he's fine with technological transhumanism but not magical ascension? For all his talk about making the world fair, it really feels like he's against it because the poors that live less sheltered, more intensely emotional lives are more likely to get magic lol.