L's POV (Lover Tier) (Patreon)

I got news for yall!!! First, here we go with L's pov.

Link: here

Next POV will be Ekissa, but I'm gonna focus on the shorts first.

A demo update will be posted soon, I'm done with the prologue (just gotta code it all). I think I was analyzing too much, spending minutes on almost every sentence and paragraph, overthinking whether I should use 'attempt', 'try', 'perhaps', 'maybe', 'though', 'but', whether that paragraph needed description, if I could tone down the whole 'using lights to describe the characters' appearances or expressions', or wondering if I added perhaps a little too much description, etc.......

So I eased up a bit on that and only added, modified, or polished stuff I REALLY needed to, to smooth it all out. I think I'll continue like that with chap 1 and 2 but probably not 3. I don't think chapter 3 will need a rewrite, though I'll have to check some things to make sure everything correlates with the plot.

When I'm done with the shorts, I plan to juggle between the rewrite and the POVs. If I stop worrying about every single line, I might go faster with the rewrite. I also have to keep in mind I can't throw you a rewrite each time I feel like I'm writing better than months ago. It's not perfect, but it's mine.

It's my first IF anyway, and telling myself that, it kind of helps me feel less pressured hahaha.

Am I rambling? Probably. Anyway! I'll give myself a week to work on the shorts, and then next week I'll continue with the rewrite and POVs.