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Alright, the prologue is fiiiiinally done. What's new (I don't remember every single change, but I'll try my best):

Extended the options text with the altercation between MC and the trash collector + added 2 new choices

Slightly expanded the hospital scene and MC's reactions to El's death

Slightly expanded the cooking scene with Ekissa, including flavor text based on the MC's reaction at the hospital

Extended the call scene with Juliet with 30 choices added, 15 for the two paths (if you answer her call or refuse to talk to her), depending on MC's state (numb, angry, act okay, etc.)

Added a scene: You can search El's name online or not.

Added a scene: You can either go to Juliet's house during El's 'funeral' or stay at home.

And that's all the big changes I remember. That gives us a total of 143k words, but I'd say it's closer to 120k words if we don't count repeated text. Let me know if there are any bugs/errors!

I'll start T's short story part 2 today, I'm so freaking excited to write something new and take a break from rewrite for a bit!!

Have an excellent day/afternoon/evening!

Early access demo link: here

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three of eight

Oh, some of the new added stuff hits really hard (in a good way). The going to the house part 😬, the extra small subtle hint by being able to search social media yourself and getting nothing at all (assuming it was Juliette but knowing why from further playing now is 🤌).

DelSuprime

is the story being rewritten? the public demo has 3 chapters.