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A Promise Kept - CHapter 23 - Further Pursuits (Patreon)

Published:
2025-09-07 13:00:12
Imported:
2026-06

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More layers to the web being woven, with more to come...

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TheNinja

Yeah they definitely were not kidding about Sabine being less than subtle. Though Harry didn't nor does he do much to dissuade her so he only has himself to blame for any trouble caused in that regard. So much for keeping himself out of trouble. Be interesting to see how Tommy's plans for resurrection go.

TheNinja

True Harry ya might not have time for girls...but that ain't stopping them all from flirting now does it? Nor showing an interest. Be curious to see how that all works out too though that Sabine is sure fire trouble, the others are as well but especially her.

odzoo

You know Lee is going to end the Malfoy line in this fic. He regularly does. It would be great if Harry took out Lucius and Hermione took away Draco ability to reproduce, in this one.

Vrail

Honestly if Sabine is going to have a role in this story I think you would be better for her to actually appear in it. Right now, I am pretty sure she has been mentioned as being trouble more often then she has actually appeared in the story. She is like a mythical creature, always talked about but literally never seen by anyone but Harry and even then its a rare event. On the other hand if there are no plans to really do anything with her maybe you should just ignore the character. The cast of this story is already one of the largest of any I have read from you, and keeping track of them all is hard enough with the ones who actually appear in the story. I know you don't do multi pairings or harems, so I just don't understand why you are keeping around multiple blatant love interests that will serve little purpose right now in the narrative. Sabine and her family are tied to MACUS, so getting involved with British issues is foolish and unlikely. Gabby and her family are clearly tied to Harry now and he is even spending time in France every week, so the choice seems pretty obvious.

Sunny

I'm glad that the author made this Voldemort aware that there are 2 child of prophecies & not just 1 he can us. Also, I'm curious as to his plan of action to draw his target in, considering he has no agent at the school. Other than that, we got to see SUPER Harry & his harem of female friends. A complete borefest. Having said that, thank you for the chapter!