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A Promise Kept - Chapter 24 - Dragons and Pukwudgies (Patreon)

Published:
2025-09-11 13:00:12
Imported:
2026-06

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The beginning of the tournament...

Comments

Mandragoran

Interesting, so no tourney for Harry. Very very interesting

TheNinja

I had a feeling sooner or later Sabine was gonna try to make a move on Harry. Turns out I was right, I figured with how bold she was being with her flirtations and all that was only a matter of time, though is this gonna be a permanent lasting thing or will it just be a fling like what Harry had with Blaise's sister or Daphne in Written in the Stars? Time will tell I suppose. Though I wouldn't mind Harry ending up with Sabine, the fact that many even her own family might be against the match makes it all the more interesting to me and I am sure makes it all the more interesting to her as well.

Matthew

So Harry, a student that has never met Cedric Diggory and lives on another continent shows more concern for his well being in the first task than his own headmaster. Albus really is a prick.

TheNinja

Well her or Hermiond or one of the other girls like maybe even Olivia. I mean Liv is the onr seems to be written about the most. Or even Hermione could be too.

TheNinja

And Harry and Gabby would be ok...if she wasn't the type to care too much about what others think what with her being Veela and all and not the type for Harry to have to swoop in and save from danger and all like chances are he will have to at some point.

AlexanderR

There is too much time dedicated to praising Harry in people's thoughts. It's chapter after chapter. In fact, a lot of other time is spent praising others as well such as James and Charlus. I think just once or twice is enough and then more time doesn't need to be wasted on it. I still enjoy the story overall. This is an issue in every story.

Sunny

I enjoyed this chapter, particularly the teachable moments with Filtwick & McGonagall. I would like to see more paragraphs dedicated to his learning at the American school, cause otherwise what's the point of him being there. At least when he was Cassie's pseudo grandson, his learning at Durmstrang was a focus. Also, are Sirius & Remus just swapping out each yr to avoid the curse? If so, that's quite funny. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. Please continue with more POV moments and can we get a Voldy update?

Matthew

Lupin is the care of Magical Creatures professor, he took the job Dumbledore gave Hagrid in the books and movies.

mnemnoch

I think it's his writing style. However, since Avalon, the glazing feels a bit excessive. Despite that, I still find his story more enjoyable than the vast majority of HP fanfiction.